| Reviews for Shards for Death |
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   SakuraLoveXox chapter 1 . 1/17/2009 That was really good... you use figures of speech so effectively. Your poetry is really good, i enjoy reading them :) |
| Antimatter Matters chapter 1 . 1/16/2009 I added this to my favourites list, I think its very good. Emotive. |
| tangerine dreamer chapter 1 . 1/14/2009 wow, i love it. it left chills down my spine. keep this up! n btw, thanks for reviewing my stuff. ) |
| alkfhdakjd1 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009 Whoa. Beautiful (in a scary, dark way). I loved the rhythm - it was perfect, something I haven't found a ton of on this site. . But that may just be me. Anyway, fantastic. |
| thanksforallthefish chapter 1 . 1/14/2009 This is awesome! |
| Silence.Do.Bad chapter 1 . 1/14/2009 I gave me shivers! Good job. . .Bad. |
| Sleeping Moonlight chapter 1 . 1/13/2009 That was really good! It really spoke to me 'cause it reminds me of my grandmothers death. It's a great poem. :) Good job. : ) |
| Amorous130 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 Wow, this is amazing. It actually gave me chills reading it. I love how it has the horror side of death involved. :D |
| FlowingPurpleInk chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 "These cracks heal if given time, But the soul is close to death." Wow, nice job! |
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 Whoa, powerful poem. Imagery is really strong and striking. I liked the rhyme scheme too. Good job. ~SayIt'sWrong |
| Isca chapter 1 . 1/11/2009 "Broken fingers clutch my own." Shocking imagery! "The souls is close to death." Aww! So sad! |
| rhymemaker chapter 1 . 1/11/2009 so cold...so lonely...so scared! |
| i'm not dead yet chapter 1 . 1/11/2009 loved it |
| AStrangerToYou chapter 1 . 1/11/2009 Random poem that you thought of for no reason? Sounds familiar. But this one really seems to prove that those are often the best. I like the title as well. It's... creepy, and it really adds to the poem. ;D |