Reviews for Innocent
Helena Starre chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
This first chapter was intriguing and left me chomping at the bit for more! Don't abandon this story, I cannot wait for the next chapter. This seemed like a story I would find in a published book at the library or in a book store. Look into getting this published when you're finished with it! ) I would definitely buy it.

Keep up the good work.
eszabela chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
it was pretty good
Proser132 chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
Sorry I don't have the time to log in. Your story is intriguing to me, but I feel that it may be moving a little too quickly. I am, however, thoroughly interested, and I WILL be check back for more chapters.

Good luck, Elody

Proser
Eshana the Searcher chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
I loved this! It was so sad, but very well written. A great little piece.

Eshana