This is totally hot! I couldn't wait to read this story when I was out today. Then, I realised it probably won't be updated. So, I hoped it would be a satisfying chapter. Good news, it was! Thanks. But, now I find myself at a loss. Please please please update this story. I didn't realise I'd get so invested in just 9 chapters. But, I have and now I'm annoyed at myself for taking that chance. I was just going to skim this story & check out your favourite authors as I was looking for a good (completed) story to sink my teeth into. But, this is the story I want to read. Please update as soon as you can...please?

So sweet and innocent. Love it!

I love how you write. Please update soon. This was so hot.

Interesting...

I like it a lot.

I'm falling for Kayden and RIngo both. There's definitely emotion here. I hope it all works out.

It's heating up & getting interesting.

I think you're a good writer. I like your style.

This is a great start. I can see that you haven't updated in a while. I'm hoping you will at some stage.

I really enjoyed the story. I can't wait to find out what happened to make them go there separate ways and if it really ends there. I cant wait for you to update :)

I do hope you continue.

I like how they call each other friends even though they're obviously a little more than that. It's like they're not forgetting what brought them together.

I'm reviewing not only because I don't want you to take this story down, but because it really is good. Sometimes stories with huge complicated plots are interesting, but it can be even more interesting to read a story about completely normal situations and have them be compelling.

I'm a fan of this story. I love how you started with a present tense introduction because it makes their back story more compelling. Like you just want to know what happened between them barely sharing a kiss on a bet, to..whatever it is they are now. I'll definitely keep reading if you keep posting.

Please enlighten me as to what a "crib" is?