Reviews for The Broken Road
zigzagpie chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
This is totally hot! I couldn't wait to read this story when I was out today. Then, I realised it probably won't be updated. So, I hoped it would be a satisfying chapter. Good news, it was! Thanks. But, now I find myself at a loss. Please please please update this story. I didn't realise I'd get so invested in just 9 chapters. But, I have and now I'm annoyed at myself for taking that chance. I was just going to skim this story & check out your favourite authors as I was looking for a good (completed) story to sink my teeth into. But, this is the story I want to read. Please update as soon as you can...please?
zigzagpie chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
So sweet and innocent. Love it!
zigzagpie chapter 7 . 4/4/2013
I love how you write. Please update soon. This was so hot.
zigzagpie chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
zigzagpie chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
I like it a lot.
zigzagpie chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
I'm falling for Kayden and RIngo both. There's definitely emotion here. I hope it all works out.
zigzagpie chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
It's heating up & getting interesting.
zigzagpie chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
I think you're a good writer. I like your style.
zigzagpie chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
This is a great start. I can see that you haven't updated in a while. I'm hoping you will at some stage.
ka-boom-ka-boom chapter 9 . 12/22/2012
I really enjoyed the story. I can't wait to find out what happened to make them go there separate ways and if it really ends there. I cant wait for you to update :)
AnnaG.Luv chapter 9 . 7/24/2009
I do hope you continue.
AnnaG.Luv chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
I like how they call each other friends even though they're obviously a little more than that. It's like they're not forgetting what brought them together.
AnnaG.Luv chapter 6 . 7/23/2009
I'm reviewing not only because I don't want you to take this story down, but because it really is good. Sometimes stories with huge complicated plots are interesting, but it can be even more interesting to read a story about completely normal situations and have them be compelling.
AnnaG.Luv chapter 4 . 7/23/2009
I'm a fan of this story. I love how you started with a present tense introduction because it makes their back story more compelling. Like you just want to know what happened between them barely sharing a kiss on a bet, to..whatever it is they are now. I'll definitely keep reading if you keep posting.
AnnaG.Luv chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Please enlighten me as to what a "crib" is?
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