I loved it! Very Canadian. It almost fits that she's from Alberta. A skirt and no jacket are perfectly acceptable clothes during a chinook!

I can't believe that I have never read your work! I have seen it around before, but never read. I really liked this sweet one shot. It's cute and very well written.

I thought this was utterly adorable. I love the way he just runs off at the mouth non-stop because he is so happy and excited to be with her. It was a sweet little story that made me smile lots. Thanks.

nathan is awesum aweeeeeeeee he is such a swettie nd cutie :) good one

Awww damn, who knew a guy could think so CUTE. That was brilliant.

i miss canada, im visiting in China right now, and in this sweltering heat, I'm definitely missing our Canadian winters /3

Cute story! :)

ahhh completely adorable oneshot!

Love the way Nathan just keeps talking so awkwardly ,and the way she seems so confused. hehe. Awesome.

:O Nathan is the cutest spazz ever. He just kept running his mouth and invading Alice's personal bubble. But Nathan sounds like such a cutie pie that I wouldn't mind him rubbing me and shoving his clothing on me. :3 Its amazing how fast you created this amaing sexual chemistry, at same time keeping it kind of innocent and sweet. Alice sounds like the idea shy, sweet girl, and Nathan energetic guy with good intentions. Love the reading to bits. Can't wait to read more of you in the future. :D

hahaha, i love this, they are so cute:).

Ahh, Canadian Love indeed. That was absolutely insanely adorable. Just sayin' ]

Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo and I am in love with your characters and style of writing! I've added this one-shot to ADoR. Here's your raving review:

Who doesn't love Deena's writing? Her characters are always quirky and borderline crazy. She's one of my all-time favorite authors, and this one-shot does not fail to make my insides warm. The POV is of a guy, which is hardly seen in FictionPress stories. It's un-cliche and simply wonderful.

XOXO,

Juliet

"James Richards," he drawled out, holding out his hand to her.

...

"A pleasure Alice," he drawled out, bringing her hand up so he could kiss it. He smirked at me some more.

I think that you might want to change the word choice for the two sentences. It's a little too repetitive.

My God this was adorable. You have an amazing talent to make all of your characters immediately interesting, and within the first paragraph I was already hooked. I am in love with your work.

GAH THIS IS THE CUTEST STORY EVER!

i love nathan! he's so adorably dorky (:

Aww, this was adorable:) very nice:D