Reviews for Ahh, Canadian Love
Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I thought this was utterly adorable. I love the way he just runs off at the mouth non-stop because he is so happy and excited to be with her. It was a sweet little story that made me smile lots. Thanks.
heal me forever chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
nathan is awesum aweeeeeeeee he is such a swettie nd cutie :) good one
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Awww damn, who knew a guy could think so CUTE. That was brilliant.
Lauranthalsala chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
i miss canada, im visiting in China right now, and in this sweltering heat, I'm definitely missing our Canadian winters /3

Cute story! :)
breatheyou7 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
ahhh completely adorable oneshot!

Love the way Nathan just keeps talking so awkwardly ,and the way she seems so confused. hehe. Awesome.
WinterInk24 chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
:O Nathan is the cutest spazz ever. He just kept running his mouth and invading Alice's personal bubble. But Nathan sounds like such a cutie pie that I wouldn't mind him rubbing me and shoving his clothing on me. :3 Its amazing how fast you created this amaing sexual chemistry, at same time keeping it kind of innocent and sweet. Alice sounds like the idea shy, sweet girl, and Nathan energetic guy with good intentions. Love the reading to bits. Can't wait to read more of you in the future. :D
xEchoxInfernox chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
hahaha, i love this, they are so cute:).
WishBlade chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Ahh, Canadian Love indeed. That was absolutely insanely adorable. Just sayin' ]
Juliet chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo and I am in love with your characters and style of writing! I've added this one-shot to ADoR. Here's your raving review:

Who doesn't love Deena's writing? Her characters are always quirky and borderline crazy. She's one of my all-time favorite authors, and this one-shot does not fail to make my insides warm. The POV is of a guy, which is hardly seen in FictionPress stories. It's un-cliche and simply wonderful.

XOXO,

Juliet
Ryhona chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
"James Richards," he drawled out, holding out his hand to her.

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"A pleasure Alice," he drawled out, bringing her hand up so he could kiss it. He smirked at me some more.

I think that you might want to change the word choice for the two sentences. It's a little too repetitive.
Mrs. Justyn Fraser chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
My God this was adorable. You have an amazing talent to make all of your characters immediately interesting, and within the first paragraph I was already hooked. I am in love with your work.
CANADAEH chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
GAH THIS IS THE CUTEST STORY EVER!

i love nathan! he's so adorably dorky (:
MyCabbages chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Aww, this was adorable:) very nice:D
balloonfista chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Oh, me loves!

Nathan's awesome :)

it was such a lot of fun reading his side of view

Ri
Genato chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
i loved this! really! I love how the guy was really possessive, but in a funny way - not the usual vampire stories where the hot vampire stakes his claim and shizz.

i like how he can't keep his mouth shut around her, how the james' dude was deliberately teasing them. i like the girl's reactions to what he's saying. so fluffy and cliche but it's cool. an di like those intreseting phrases you use as your narrative. :) keep it up, deena! :)
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