Reviews for Singer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is about as far as I got in this story before I checked out. No offense to the author, even though this account is dead, but if you didn't tell me I was reading a story posted by a teenager in the late 2000's, I'd know. Even when I was the same age as this author around the same time period, I wouldn't have been able to finish reading it. It's just too much. Too much dialogue, not enough detail. Too much progress between the characters too fast. Too much cringe, too much talking as her character in the A/N. Too much xD and o3o energy. Rachel is just one cliché too many, even if she reminds me a bit of my ex. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I understand leaving a review in 2022 for an account that has been seemingly dead for 6-7 years is basically useless, but I wanted to let it out. Normally, with this kind of ending, I would check out the sequel and see if that's something worth going through. So I looked, and what do you know, sequel is unfinished and hasn't been updated in years. Usually, even if I see that, I might check it out if it seems like it won't take too much time, usually by checking the final chapter. Onegirl has 80 chapters and I assume it's still a ways off from ending. So the sequel is useless, which means I have to judge this based on this story alone, which is a problem since you end it on a fucking cliffhanger. Holy hell, the ending of this has effectively made my reading of this a waste of time. If it was just a cliffhanger, I'd be aggravated and but I wouldn't be mad. Except, you decide to have them break up at the end of the fucking story, and then tease a god-damned will they won't they sequel. And since there is not sequel, not one that matters, I'm just left with nothing. There is not resolution to this story. Jessica has a boyfriend who doesn't even have a presence in this. And the fact that your selling it actually pisses me off more than the actual ending. If I bought this and got this ending, then discovered that there was going to be a sequel before the author just left the internet, I would feel angrier because I spent money on this for nothing. The only advice I could offer, and this is more for aspiring authors on this website than it is for the writer of Singer, but don't write with the intention of making a sequel. Leaving some things open for a sequel is fine, but write an ending that concludes your story. Most people who post on this website don't finish shit, so if you actually finish a story, for christ's sake please end it. Don't write 160k words and then say "lol this was the start of the story". So yeah, it was decent until the ending. |
![]() ![]() Damn... She sounds just like the female version of me, except with shorter hair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only the male platypus. The female platypus is the onky animal on earth with the ability to make its own custard. :D |
![]() ![]() How is Strawberry Panic stupid? It's a very well-written story, with a coherent narrative with a strong sense of progress and characters with believable motivations that drive them and good depth. It's a beautiful drama. Also, good story, by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The awaited coffee-shop-talk-about-all-stuff-that-will-cause-rumours-to-spread-and-quite-possible-some-fights-or-people-ignoring-one-another date has finally arrived (those hyphens were a bitch for me)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn it, in every single story I've read so far when they go to Starbucks or a damn coffee shop to talk about stuff THERE IS ALWAYS SOMEONE FROM THEIR DAMN SCHOOL WITH A BIG MOUTH WHO OVER HEARS THE CONVERSATION AND SPREADS IT AROUND THE SCHOOL SO THIS NEXT CHAPTER IS THE STARBUCKS DATE AND I AM JUST WAITING BECAUSE DAMN THAT IS LIKE A FLAG FOR ME SO I AM EXPECTING IT I HAVE MYSELF READY Also, I completely forwent the idea of the title being a hint, I also didn't really remember the title, I remember the synopsis rather than titles which makes it hard to find stories if I can't find them in my history or never left a review or favourite. That is assuming you didn't change the title over the years, of course. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheering, I reviewed my "call". But I think I mentioned it then, as soon as she had all those instruments, which she had to master and that she could sing, y'know "Closeted", since they could harmonize and all that was like a big ol' sign saying "YO I AM ONEGIRL" |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES I DAMN WELL CALLED IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, without a doubt since she had to master all these instruments and she can sing, Rachel is OneGirl. At least that's what I'm calling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA MYSPACE YES |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this book,, I'm sure I've read it like 10 times by now. Although I really hate Jessie, even on one girl. I always thought Rachel deserves so much better |
![]() ![]() I've read this for like the 4th time but this time was after a year i guess. Still so awesome. You are awesome. You were absent for like again a year but i guess you are back now. Keep rocking and writing. Im gonna go and read the next one...again. nice job. |
![]() ![]() Oh god, Rachel... In that outfit... Soooo many hormones... I feel you, Jessica *melts* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story, took me 2 days to finish. I hate Jessie, I never liked her from the beginning, she's annoying. Rachel deserves we never get what we deserve, do we? |