Reviews for The Not So Princess and The Pea
Topaz36 chapter 19 . 12/30/2009
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Topaz36 chapter 18 . 12/30/2009
Ah... :( That stinks he had to leave the room. AND WHERE DID HE GO? I hope Gwen's words didn't push him away or anything! They need to work this out.

And I have only one more to go... bittersweet. Again, it will probably be great, knowing you.

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 17 . 12/30/2009
Yay! Devon's there! Of course, she probably is not viewing it as a positive currently, but I'm happy! :D :D :D

Uh, oh. I only have to more chapters to go! :( Hopefully, you don't end on a cliffhanger on the last chapter... oh well, I'm sure both of these chapters will be just as great as the rest of your story.

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 16 . 12/30/2009
Hehe, they're coming **sing song**. Even though, technically, Ashton had already showed up in England, but who cares. DEVON is coming (okay, so I like Devon now). :D

What will happen next? That's one thing I love about reading a story that has multiple chapters; I know there is more I can read. Yay!

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
Wait, what? Ashton is there! **Squeals** :D

Anyway, he is probably there on behalf of his brother (who probably should've come himself, but I guess I have to read to see how this unfolds).

Now I simply must finish reading all your chapters!

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
Aw, she has a "family" in England.

But why is she so shocked about the pea thing? I mean seeing as how she was one of the final three girls in the house, she should have had an inkling that being/marrying Devon could be a possibility. Oh well... I just have to see how everything will be resolved. :D

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 13 . 12/30/2009
HA! So there is some similarity to the Princess and the Pea (yes, I am slow...).

Oh and I enjoy how you showed Devon's POV once in a while; it gives us some insight. :D

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 12 . 12/30/2009
Aw, that sucks that he broke the pinky swear :(. Poor Gwen...

I could not help but laugh when you wrote the score between her and Carla. At least, Gwen was in the lead. ;)

You have a great story so far, if you can't tell from my reviews.

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 11 . 12/30/2009
Haha, I love Ronnie just because of how adorable he was! Oh, and I do admit I feel slightly sorry for Devon (I don't know what on earth for, but I do). Why must you swing my feelings to him (I still like Ashton, though, if that isn't clear)? Dang, you're a good author.

Oh and I just checked out the pictures you had of the three main characters and I have to say that the two guys that you picked were perfect.

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 10 . 12/30/2009
I may not be too happy about the fact that she is getting over Ashton, but this story is still good (hey, if she don't want him, her loss... hehe jk :D). Anyway, I still need to see what happens next, specifically with Devon. :) Okay, so he is growing on me (slowly but surely :P).

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 9 . 12/30/2009
Haha! I love that little bit before she enters the classroom, thinking about Devon. Classic!

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 8 . 12/30/2009
I knew it! There were going to be fireworks with him. Dang it. :P

I absolutely Gwen's train of thought and how she thinks. I can absolutely relate to her in certain situations (thinking-wise). Funny stuff! :D

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 7 . 12/30/2009
Okay, so I get that Devon has been secretly nice for her by beating up people, but even when he was telling her this he was still being cocky (kinda). So I'm still rooting for Ashton, even though sadly, Gwen currently believes there are no "sparks" (let me guess: there will be sparks between her and Devin... :P). Plus Devon got her into trouble with Pu- I mean Gertrude. :D

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 6 . 12/30/2009
No sparks? Ah, nuts! Well, I hope she sorts her feelings out and soon. All I can say is you are a great writer because I'm beginning to go along with Gwen on her rollar coaster (aka her life) and want her to find whatever it is that she is looking for (I'm still rooting for Ashton, but that's just me...).

Anywho, I still have like thirteen more chapters so I better hop to.

~Topaz36
Topaz36 chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
So far so good. I only have one question though: in chapter four, it appeared that Devon had just barely figured out that it was Mariella and her gang who beat Gwen up and made her end up in the hospital, but in this chapter the flashback shows that he guessed who it was, so which is it? Of course, I could be misinterpreting it, so if that's the case, ignore my question. :D

Anyway, it sounds like the plot is thickening. How exciting!

~Topaz36
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