|Reviews for The Not So Princess and The Pea|
| Clare1477 chapter 2 . 1/15/2009
Heyy! omg, i luv all ur stuff! I don't know how u com up with ur ideas... i only get a good 1 like once a year! lol and u no what happens next... lol so yea, I luv it! like always.. soo i look forward to the rest of it! 9.9 out of 10!
| theslykit chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
i see mistakes here too...
and why don't you use commas with quotes? "The crab is actually really good," spoke a dirty blonde. I think her name was Lily. you do this quite a lot you know...
mascara brush; said my name, I heard; No wonder people; why are all the food capitalized?; incredulously; the kind that come out; fantastical. Sweet irony; why is soccer capitalized?; his eyebrows; every Wednesday; You're right
i may have missed some but i was kind of skimming lol. please update soon!
| theslykit chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
many mistakes but nothing that can't be fixed!
eligible; sacrificed; one hundred too many; God's sake; too thick eyeliner; without breaking into; shouldn't it be diaper days or something?; immediately; octave voices; by the way, you're missing a lot of commas for your adjectives...like brown, dirty blonde hair and etc.; an arrogant smile; A lump constricted
despite the errors, seemed like a fun chapter! :D
| CreativeChick233 chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
absoloutely loved it(:
| SweetScorpio chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
Love it so far! Can't wait to see where you take it.
| shecanread chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
M nice story :D
i added it to my favorites. so i expect alot of updates!
| In-a-fiction-world chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
O omg! this is one of my new favorite stories! X3 def write more soon!
| ohxrosie chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
I like the brunettes. Strong silent type is good too.
| Elle for Love to Write chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
that is soo
but soo good
please update when you can.
i am looking forward to see what happens next.
| HolidaeInn chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
O I like it...Ashton was a nice little surprise...Im sensing a love triangle type deal *waggles eyebrows* lol
both boys sound drool worthy at this point...and I freaking love converse and skinny jeans thats what sold me on the story ]
| midknightdreamr chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
That is really good I like the darkish brother, btw your a really good writer I love all your stories!
| mollyollyolly chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
i like it... it has good potential. i like the whole hair dye leads to brain damage thing. maybe the moms name should be ellen! i lurve u huns! beastly writing!
| innoc3nc3cuti3 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Your story began with a good start, is quite intriguing and remind me bit of the Bachelor. Hope you update soon. )
| Elle for Love to Write chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
its a really good beginning
i'm already hooked
can't wait to see what happens next!
Please update asap!
| NightDreamer17 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
hey, just wanted to let you know, love the story! cant wait to read the next chapter! ]