|Reviews for Dream Family|
| Kidwiththecap chapter 3 . 1/21/2009
Hahaha Do you want it now? That's such a stupid thing for Mark to say. Poor Evelyne.
I liked the peper spray Gabby had.
This is really cute. There's just one part that I'm a little condfused about. If Evelyne's never been to a club before, what was the thing that she almost got arrested for? She called it an ilegal club at once point, but I guess that's different than what she's at now?
| writing-addict77 chapter 2 . 1/15/2009
This chapter made me think of so much. I shall now make a list!
1)HENRY! In a show I love, there's an adorable nerdy sarcastic character named Hnery who I absolutely love so he was the first to pop in my head. That, and I love that name.
2) The twins! Weasley twins in Harry Potter (Fred is my future husband, lol). So cute!
3) Daniel, another of my favorite names!
4)When Mark calls her E-V, I thought of V for Vendetta. Awesome movie!
5) The contacts thing. TOTALLY know how she feels. I've never even considered contacts because the thought of putting them in creeps me out.
I think that's it...
I like this so far. I like that there's still a little mystery surrounding everything. Can't wait for more!
PS: This is the longest review I have ever written.
| writing-addict77 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Wow, lots of mystery surrounding this. Can't wait to see what happens next. Like it so far!
| FallenAngelFromTheSky chapter 2 . 1/15/2009
i like this story! update soon please!
| Kidwiththecap chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
"I stood in the middle of the living room, trying not to notice all the eyes that were focused on me. The guy that had kidnapped me — who I was beginning to think was the leader, by the way everyone else deferred to him — everyone to me."
The last part of the sentence didn't make sense to me.
Um . . .oh, and you didn't tell me that you updated! I like the characters. And Marks a jerk! He kidnaps a girl and forces her to become his slave?He is so lucky her parents are dead and cant send his sorry ass to jail.
hahaha. It's very humerous.
| Kidwiththecap chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I remember reading this story when is was all scibbley and almost illegible. Now it's so much better. I didn't notice any spellinh mistakes or grammer issues . . .except maybe a misplace common, but not really sure were commons are suppose to go anyway, so maybe it's not misplaced.
Did you say the beggining of this story was a dream you had? It seems like one crazy dream . . .joining an illegal club? hahaha.
I should probably fix my own chapters, since . . .they're crappy with spelling issues and grammer flaws, but I have to go to school, and do alot of crap, and I think I'm sick from stressing myself out. Yep, it's fun dying from stress.
Hope to read your next chapter soon.