Reviews for When The World Breathes
Miss English chapter 1 . 4/7/2009

Second Review! :D

I love how you describe every single aspect of your surroundings; it is very poetic and distinctly reminds me of an extremely talented man's style, Robert Frost.

Also, I'd like to thank you for your review for my story!

I will definitely look for a BETA reader soon.

In the next chapter, I'd like to put a cameo of you in there.

So, if you want one, message me with something-maybe your name-that you want to appear in chapter two.

Alright, well, you did marvelously on this piece!

Keep writing!


[ Okay just an embarrassing note to make you laugh: I left this exact review on a completely different story. I feel so dumb right now it's not even funny. :D ]
Narq chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Wow! I can see why you got high marks on this one, it was simply pure and beautiful!