Reviews for but i was afraid you didn't want me to
Isca chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
"But I was afraid you didn't want me to." A line full of bittersweet emotions.
Missie chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I think it's good, a suggestion is in teh last line of teh third stanza, possibly saying "in teh darkness or the sea" but I just think that the rhythm is a bit better, I'll c u school