Reviews for Black Sheep Part 1
katanalover chapter 20 . 10/11/2010
A really captivating story.

the way you jumped in the beginning with vic remembering stuff was very interesting and the whole style of writing from the different perspectives made the story more rounded, but some parts were a bit confusing in that it was hard to identify whose perspective was being read. but i loved the storyline :D though, and this is just the addict reader in me, you should write more on it, i sort of feel like it can still go somewhere... but maybe that's just me.
pg13-writer chapter 20 . 9/4/2010
great finale chapter for part 1 cant wait for part 2 :)
pg13-writer chapter 19 . 8/9/2010
i'm really likning this story. can't wait until you post the next chapter.
canuckscommunity chapter 13 . 4/6/2010
Wow, harsh.. I can't imagine anyone would be so cold when finding something like that out about someone... :(

Sorry I'm late in reviewing, my dear! I haven't had much time lately due to hockey and school too.

Thanks for the two new chapters though, always nice to come home to something to read _ I liked this chapter a lot too... Poor Vic seems so insecure (
aWishThatNeverComesTrue chapter 11 . 1/16/2010
Love Love Love it, now I really want to know whats happening. plz add another chapter soon, my mental stability rests in your hands
canuckscommunity chapter 11 . 12/26/2009
Hey hunni it's been a while... I had to re-read some chapters (and some new ones :D) to re-fresh my memory x)

And more sensual scenes, I'm a sucker for those o3o Vic seems to have post-traumatic stress symptoms too, it'd be interesting to learn more about his character.

Merry (late) Christmas and thanks for the new chapters!
Kikue Mugen chapter 10 . 11/23/2009
Spotted a few typos, but the overall story went very well. I've noticed a great imporvement since the beginning of the story - becoming seasoned along the way, I see ;) The outstanding "positive" about the chapter is the fact that it is very descriptive which is a big plus to making the chapter an interesting read. Keep up the good work!
aWishThatNeverComesTrue chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
wow
canuckscommunity chapter 8 . 4/29/2009
huh that's such a coincidence, everytime i decide to drop by your fic is always updated :'D good writing with vic in this chapter too... his attack really felt panicked. update again soon :D
canuckscommunity chapter 7 . 4/19/2009
great chapter again, the first part especially... so sweet . and thanks for the shoutouts- you're very welcome x)
canuckscommunity chapter 6 . 4/5/2009
i like your characters, marie is so cute . she kinda reminds me of sakura from naruto.

anyways thanks for the new chapter, this story is quite well-written . it's hard to find good shonen-ai with plot and character development xD

hehe and sorry for the late review, i'm on fanfiction more than fictionpress nowadays (...anime fanatic xD) update again soon!
Kikue Mugen chapter 6 . 3/30/2009
Yes! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Wonderfully written from beginning to end. Lovely build up to their meeting, very sensual in its anticipation. A great cliff hanger at the end always makes the reader want MORE! I know I do and look forward to reading the next chapter. Good job!
Orichalcum chapter 6 . 3/29/2009
Ah, they're kissing, they're kissing!
canuckscommunity chapter 5 . 3/13/2009
hehe i guess i still owe you a review . sorry sometimes i just read a story but am too lazy to drop a message to the author xD;;

this is a good story, really well-written. i like m/m stories so i'm quite happy i found this xD your characters are interesting... i like interaction between them, it's written quite fluidly.

i shall await your next update
Kikue Mugen chapter 5 . 3/12/2009
As usual the chapter has me looking forward to the next, which means you did a great job at 'story telling.' However I did catch a few grammar and typos along the way, but it didn't distract from the story. Overall, the story has me hoping things will work out for the characters, and again it keep the reader guessing and that is what makes the story interesting.
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