|Reviews for Esclava|
| zagato chapter 6 . 1/12/2019
This is cool, kindly update, thank you!
| kiki19857 chapter 6 . 10/4/2015
poke? Could you update this one? it's a good story.
| Prodigee123 chapter 6 . 10/7/2013
| Bubbly Girl chapter 6 . 10/6/2012
I can't wait to read more! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| dr3 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Totally love this story. Will you be returning to finish it?
| WanderingTheDreams chapter 6 . 1/29/2011
Hm, I'm not quite sure that I like our Lord Iztili... but I do ADORE Trillesta.
Especially the comment "When the Jaguar eats a fish from your river, do you bring him here as well?" LMAO
| Cleao girl chapter 6 . 5/30/2010
Trillesta..That's an odd name for your character Lol
it's the first time I come across this name.
Well I absolutely love this fic!
However, I would like to point out a few things
In the summary of the fic, you said that trillesta wasn't a perfect woman, she had scars to prove it..
Are the scars physical or emotional? You didn't really specify and in the last chapter, you said she was pleasant to the eyes
Furthermore, i think you should write more about the inner feelings of your characters.
After trillesta got kidnap, didn't she miss her family and her past life at all?
I'm also really suprised that coffee already story is situated when?
Lastly I like the budding relationship between the king and the servant.
| Writinglovestories21 chapter 6 . 3/20/2010
Aw! You really have to update this story! I like it A LOT!
| sillygoose2008 chapter 6 . 2/10/2010
That old man is an ass but kind of funny. Can't wait to read more please post soon thank you.
| sillygoose2008 chapter 5 . 2/10/2010
Looks like they are getting along well i hope the pottery turn out nice.
| sillygoose2008 chapter 4 . 2/10/2010
Funny she doesn't know what coffee is she is such a cute character.
| sillygoose2008 chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
The king kind of seems nice but Molasses is plain me. Really like your characters.
| sillygoose2008 chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
Intersecting now she is forced to work in the palace wonder how that is going to be.
| sillygoose2008 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Really like this story.
| renegade01 chapter 6 . 2/10/2010
looks like iztili (lord, my ass) likes to play mind games. i don't like him - he's a big meanie! trillesta is cool, nice name too. keep updating, i can't wait to read more. ;)