Reviews for The Holy Ghost
brunettelitlover chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
I like how you keep using 'Holy Ghost' but I had to read over this a few times to let it sink in. I suggest you try toying with imagery a bit, adding it to you poem so we can get more of a visual instead of just an emotion? I'd like to see that. You have the emotion down.

Keep Writing!