Reviews for Still
Isca chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
"Sometimes, I wish she could stand me." Aww! This line is so sad! The poem is very relatable and honest. Keep up the good work! :)
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Great job. Sad, but well written piece. Very real. You seem like an amazing person, so it's her own fault for not speaking with you. She's missing out :)

Faith
Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Beautifully written. The emotion just reaches out and touches you. I love the words you chose to use, they really impact the reader!

Dreaming Chica
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
beautiful, just beautiful. The last two lines were just so well put, and worded. ahh, keep it up :)
Fugitive-From-The-Future chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
this poem is great, I don't particulally like the song bit at the beginning but because i'm not really into that kind of music, but thats just my opinion of why I personly don't like it. I love the idea thought because its really realistic, you love someone who can't stand you, I especially like the last line because it really brings the poem to a good finish :) it's really good though, your a fab writer :)