Reviews for Kingdom Come
Addiena Saffir chapter 1 . 1/27
I think these characters are going to be a hoot.
Skyless11 chapter 6 . 1/17
ok. this chapter was sexy as fuck too. especially the hugging-in-lap part ._. I really like rory atm. more than Oli or Deangelo
Skyless11 chapter 5 . 1/17
oki I know this is completed and usually I don't comment until the end but holyfuckingshit this chapter was so goddamn sexy :O
Zevlin22 chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
lol. Oliver is priceless
opelleam chapter 22 . 9/30/2013
This story is really great and i hope you will write the sequel cause i'm not done yet with your characters, i want more of them.
BeautifulNoMatterWhat chapter 22 . 9/17/2013
Please do the sequel! *puppy dog eyes* It's already 2013! I really love Oliver's character! For some reason I don't see him as a whiny selfish person xD Can't wait for what's in store! :D
Starry chapter 10 . 7/19/2013
Ugh! So all that could basically be prevented if Oliver had not been such a biatch? Huh he'll
Never learn his lesson ...
Guest chapter 5 . 7/4/2013
So this is the gay version of the Fallen series by Lauren Kate?
R. Ficst chapter 22 . 5/12/2013
yay for gorgeous wings : )
R. Ficst chapter 19 . 5/12/2013
...something tells me this is headed toward an infinished ending waiting for a sequel
R. Ficst chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
just a little typo, you said "bank robbery" but it was a convenience store

I also still don't know why they haven't talked to each other and explained what happened with the initial hating issue.
R. Ficst chapter 6 . 5/12/2013
I'm wondering why if the whole reason he's here is because they're supposed life mates, why he would initially reject Oli.
R. Ficst chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
Hahaha caught in a stick-up. Wasn't expecting that : )
falling-into-fate chapter 22 . 5/6/2013
Omfg. That was amazing! Hot, beautiful, awesome. Lol. I really want to know what happens though. Hard to believe that it's the end. Thanks for this read, I love it!
Vojeto chapter 18 . 5/5/2013
No, he's really not growing as a character, you just think he is.
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