Reviews for Playing it Cool
pinkguppie chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I laughed and laughed and laughed; I had a really bad day but that just made me feel so much better.

Awesome story!

x3life chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
aw this was so cute )
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
This version of friends turning into lovers seemed more realistic. I really enjoyed reading about the conversation these two had with each other. Very realistic. It wasn't just declaring love with heavy make-out sessions. I liked the calmer approach. Good work!
Kelly chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Another great story! This one had just the right amount of humour, and I liked that the characters were just that little bit awkward around one another once feelings were revealed. Both of their reactions were realistic, which is something that a lot of FP stories lack. I like to suspend belief as much as the next person but I do prefer some realism thrown in every now and then.

Again, good job!
Jade Q. Dean chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
It's cute
Maybe Passion chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
This is hilarious. I can really feel the awkwardness in parts of the story. Great job and keep writing.
sweet vanilla mint chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
SO CUTE. :) Made my day. Great work!
The Innocent One 17 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
i like it, especially the end. with the revenge on the twins. good story. you're a good author too. :)
holly is fainting chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
YOU ARE FANTASTIC. I love you, I want to BE you. haha sorry. It's just that I love your stories. You're such a good writer. I actually got *chills* during this story. Your words caused me to have a physical response. So I'd say, well done.

If I pay you, will you write a long story? Like, with chapters? Because you'd write great ones. Not that I don't love the one-shots. I'm gonna get around to the other very soon.
WalkingUnnoticed chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
that was great!
NoieD chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Great one-shot! I was impressed by the way these characters handled the situation. They were themselves, slightly awkward, but mature about what they actually feel. I totally enjoyed this!
xcrunner21 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
that was very cute and well written!
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
nice cool act.
LittleMissProcrastinator chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
While I did find the end-of-story kissing a little cliche, this was well written and had some great moments, like "She sounds crazy, but let me assure you – she’s actually crazier". The chemistry was sweet without being sappy and, overall, the story seemed pretty polished. (By the way, I love the name Derek.)
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