| Reviews for Playing it Cool |
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   pinkguppie chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 I laughed and laughed and laughed; I had a really bad day but that just made me feel so much better. Awesome story! Gup |
| x3life chapter 1 . 5/6/2009 aw this was so cute ) |
| EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 1/21/2009 This version of friends turning into lovers seemed more realistic. I really enjoyed reading about the conversation these two had with each other. Very realistic. It wasn't just declaring love with heavy make-out sessions. I liked the calmer approach. Good work! |
| Kelly chapter 1 . 1/19/2009 Another great story! This one had just the right amount of humour, and I liked that the characters were just that little bit awkward around one another once feelings were revealed. Both of their reactions were realistic, which is something that a lot of FP stories lack. I like to suspend belief as much as the next person but I do prefer some realism thrown in every now and then. Again, good job! |
| Jade Q. Dean chapter 1 . 1/18/2009 It's cute |
| Maybe Passion chapter 1 . 1/17/2009 This is hilarious. I can really feel the awkwardness in parts of the story. Great job and keep writing. |
| sweet vanilla mint chapter 1 . 1/17/2009 SO CUTE. :) Made my day. Great work! |
| The Innocent One 17 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009 i like it, especially the end. with the revenge on the twins. good story. you're a good author too. :) |
| holly is fainting chapter 1 . 1/16/2009 YOU ARE FANTASTIC. I love you, I want to BE you. haha sorry. It's just that I love your stories. You're such a good writer. I actually got *chills* during this story. Your words caused me to have a physical response. So I'd say, well done. If I pay you, will you write a long story? Like, with chapters? Because you'd write great ones. Not that I don't love the one-shots. I'm gonna get around to the other very soon. |
| WalkingUnnoticed chapter 1 . 1/16/2009 that was great! |
| NoieD chapter 1 . 1/16/2009 Great one-shot! I was impressed by the way these characters handled the situation. They were themselves, slightly awkward, but mature about what they actually feel. I totally enjoyed this! |
| xcrunner21 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009 that was very cute and well written! |
| Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 1/15/2009 nice cool act. |
| LittleMissProcrastinator chapter 1 . 1/15/2009 While I did find the end-of-story kissing a little cliche, this was well written and had some great moments, like "She sounds crazy, but let me assure you – she’s actually crazier". The chemistry was sweet without being sappy and, overall, the story seemed pretty polished. (By the way, I love the name Derek.) |