Oh man, I'm hooked already! Only chapter one too. The character is catchy, witty and down to earth. I love her! I'm excited to read the rest, so I'll go do that now. D

Oh . . . poor Ruffy. He's the only some what normal one.

I noticed some type-os in this one. You had a couple before, but I found like . . . three. It's the end of the world! Not really. Incase you wanted to fix them or something

“It’s that conniving bastard, Lustspawn!”

“Who da fug is Lushpawn?”

HAHAHAHA! I laughed out loud.

I lied. I'm sending you more reviews. yAy! Working at pet shop looks like fun, but I would be sad when animals would have to go away.

How comes she's afaid of crickets, but not frozen mice?

(cries)I miss people like that too.

Since the chapters are so short, and I like reading this story so much that I don't like stopping between chapters, I don't think I'm going to be able to have a review for every chapter. I almost forget that I should right one befoe hitting the next button

Aw . . .they're bonding . . .

Aw, she's jelouse . . .of a cat. These chapters are really short. I can't say a whole lot, but I really, really, like it

HAHAHAHA! I lOVE THIS STORY! And the random soy sauce in the fridge. This story is so crazy, you don't know what's going to happen next, and I really like the contrast between the characters of Ailee and Jee.

This chapter had me cracking up. I just love how jee suddenly has this blood lust and goes after the naked guy with a crazy grin. It made me laugh . . .a lot

hahaha for a second I was so confused. Who's Carol?

hahaha that was interesting. I like Kent alittle more now, but I really glad I don't actually know him.

I don't know if I like Kent. He reminds me too much of Johnny from the Godfather and he bothered me. Ailee is cute though. And I like Jee because she's all (tries to think of a word to discribes) I don't know, but I like her

Aw . . .poor whatever sidkick person. I like it. It really connects to the average person. And I like to read/listen to people complain. As long as its not about me that is

Avoid adverbs. They're evil beings sent to destroy us all. I'd keep "wetly" - I happen to like it - but scrap the "quickly" immediately after that. Quickness is implied, making the adverb unnecessary.

I love the Aristocats. Brings back good memories. Do you honestly know that many cat movies, or did you IMDb-search anything with the word "cat" in it? (I've seen "That Darn Cat", actually. It's mediocre, but not terrible).

I've decided Jee is amazing. She's so funny!

Jyokita? I see why she wants to be called "Jee." I would, too.

Spelling error in the last sentence:

"Even I know better than the genuinely piss off a chick that can kick my ass with magic."

Change that "the" to a "to" and you're golden.

haha i love this. The concept is so original and really intriguing!

Aww, the poor cat. But I feel bad for . . . Jee? Is that her name? That must suck. Just like this review. I wish I could say more, but my brain feels like it's been wrung out from editing too much. Sorry.

Anyway, I love this lots!