Reviews for Secondhand Sidekick
MorbidAngelXxX chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Oh man, I'm hooked already! Only chapter one too. The character is catchy, witty and down to earth. I love her! I'm excited to read the rest, so I'll go do that now. D
Kidwiththecap chapter 13 . 1/24/2009
Oh . . . poor Ruffy. He's the only some what normal one.

I noticed some type-os in this one. You had a couple before, but I found like . . . three. It's the end of the world! Not really. Incase you wanted to fix them or something
Kidwiththecap chapter 11 . 1/24/2009
“It’s that conniving bastard, Lustspawn!”

“Who da fug is Lushpawn?”

HAHAHAHA! I laughed out loud.
Kidwiththecap chapter 10 . 1/24/2009
I lied. I'm sending you more reviews. yAy! Working at pet shop looks like fun, but I would be sad when animals would have to go away.

How comes she's afaid of crickets, but not frozen mice?
Kidwiththecap chapter 9 . 1/24/2009
(cries)I miss people like that too.

Since the chapters are so short, and I like reading this story so much that I don't like stopping between chapters, I don't think I'm going to be able to have a review for every chapter. I almost forget that I should right one befoe hitting the next button
Kidwiththecap chapter 8 . 1/21/2009
Aw . . .they're bonding . . .
Kidwiththecap chapter 6 . 1/21/2009
Aw, she's jelouse . . .of a cat. These chapters are really short. I can't say a whole lot, but I really, really, like it
Kidwiththecap chapter 5 . 1/21/2009
HAHAHAHA! I lOVE THIS STORY! And the random soy sauce in the fridge. This story is so crazy, you don't know what's going to happen next, and I really like the contrast between the characters of Ailee and Jee.
Kidwiththecap chapter 4 . 1/21/2009
This chapter had me cracking up. I just love how jee suddenly has this blood lust and goes after the naked guy with a crazy grin. It made me laugh . . .a lot
Kidwiththecap chapter 3 . 1/19/2009
hahaha for a second I was so confused. Who's Carol?

hahaha that was interesting. I like Kent alittle more now, but I really glad I don't actually know him.
Kidwiththecap chapter 2 . 1/19/2009
I don't know if I like Kent. He reminds me too much of Johnny from the Godfather and he bothered me. Ailee is cute though. And I like Jee because she's all (tries to think of a word to discribes) I don't know, but I like her
Kidwiththecap chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Aw . . .poor whatever sidkick person. I like it. It really connects to the average person. And I like to read/listen to people complain. As long as its not about me that is
Forestwater chapter 7 . 1/19/2009
Avoid adverbs. They're evil beings sent to destroy us all. I'd keep "wetly" - I happen to like it - but scrap the "quickly" immediately after that. Quickness is implied, making the adverb unnecessary.

I love the Aristocats. Brings back good memories. Do you honestly know that many cat movies, or did you IMDb-search anything with the word "cat" in it? (I've seen "That Darn Cat", actually. It's mediocre, but not terrible).

I've decided Jee is amazing. She's so funny!

Jyokita? I see why she wants to be called "Jee." I would, too.

Spelling error in the last sentence:

"Even I know better than the genuinely piss off a chick that can kick my ass with magic."

Change that "the" to a "to" and you're golden.
Jessiquie chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
haha i love this. The concept is so original and really intriguing!
Forestwater chapter 6 . 1/18/2009
Aww, the poor cat. But I feel bad for . . . Jee? Is that her name? That must suck. Just like this review. I wish I could say more, but my brain feels like it's been wrung out from editing too much. Sorry.

Anyway, I love this lots!
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