Reviews for Changes
PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
I LOVE this! Awesome job! I have a few suggestions too.

1. It only takes a moment

I would make this

But, It only takes a moment.

2. I would break this up into stanzas.

3. I would add And to the last line, like this,

And the sun will shine another day.

Remember, these are just suggestions. Great job! This is going on my favorites!
we are miles apart chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
it was good. well, for me.. change is pretty normal. the only thing that is not certain in this world is Change. :) pls read my works too. :)