|Reviews for Changes|
| PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
I LOVE this! Awesome job! I have a few suggestions too.
1. It only takes a moment
I would make this
But, It only takes a moment.
2. I would break this up into stanzas.
3. I would add And to the last line, like this,
And the sun will shine another day.
Remember, these are just suggestions. Great job! This is going on my favorites!
| we are miles apart chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
it was good. well, for me.. change is pretty normal. the only thing that is not certain in this world is Change. :) pls read my works too. :)