|Reviews for The Machine|
| ForTheLoveOfWords chapter 3 . 1/31/2009
uh...where is the rest of it? I wanna know what happens!
| JackInk chapter 3 . 1/31/2009
Very interesting so far. I can't wait to read more. Perhaps you could go into more detail of the Time Machine itself?
| Keith Stokes chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I must say that I think you should have made all 3 chapters into 1 chapter as they are all rather short (in the case of chapter 1 too short). Also in chapter you you wrote "he ouldn’t help but smirk" I think you mean't to type "he couldn't help but smirk" Apart from these small points I think you have made a good start and will happily read more once it is done.
| dragontama9511 chapter 3 . 1/29/2009
It's pretty good, but isn't 13:03 actually 1:03? Please update soon?
| Aleksy The Flying Onion chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Hm. For an introductory chapter, I would have a liked a bit more to go on.
Despite that, I like that the scientist 'smirked'. I am assuming it was because of pride; which is much more interesting than one who being smiling optimistically because he's going to save the world or something.
I'm curious to see what the world leaders will say about his invention. Please continue!