Reviews for The Attic
The Geek in the Pink chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Really well written! I enjoyed it loads.
Said Author chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Wow. That was amazingly creepy. o_o

Nice work! I wonder what was inside that closet...?
YawnieBug chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
I really like your story and I would like permission to use your general outline to write a story of my own. I love the idea that when a little girl and her brother fool around, the girl locks her brother inside an attic closet and in fear, she leaves him there. I would also be utilizing the idea that moving to a new house would be the catalyst for the little girl to reopen the closet once more. Besides that, my fiction would differ from yours (especially the ending!). So, may I have permission?
Sugar Sasparilla chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Oh my goodness. O;

Amazing story. It was just vague enough to give it that intense and creepy mood. I'm kind of scared to know what goes on in my attic now.
Warrayfinson chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Oh WOW! I love this story! I also like your writing style, it's much better then mine. This is an awesome story, I hope to see more from you soon ;)

Keep Writng!
Marquise d'Horreur chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Very creepy! Loved this, great job...freaked me out..._
Dareth22 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Creepy! Haha, that was good. Awesome job.
Dark-TailsPrower chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
man...that is creepy...but I'm pretty diffrent form everyone else, now I feel sad for all of them...poor older brother and everyone else but thier deaths werent shown long...Im so sad xD
TechnoWielder chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
That definitely gave me the chills. 0_0