Reviews for The Final beat
blAck.eMOhawk chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
OMG I LOVE this poem, lol you must think I'm emo. XD I like these description and how you described the heartbeat as song. I'm fav-ing it!
demon's lulabell D chapter 1 . 4/14/2009


what i love the most about the poem is the "bum bump" part!

kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I like this alot. The onomatopeia's you used definately added to the effect of your poem and the imagery you used was very well done, especially liked the stanza that starts off with: “Bum bump”

Like a cheetah’s speed

Well done.

Alwaysbtheir chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
lol yea i dont have an account on this site

but wow its very intersting indeed - i like it
chris3169512 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Hallo, Michi~! :D

Sorry that I never understood poems before and even if the meaning was obviously right in front of my face, I still wouldn't see it - Seriously o.O"

But anyways, tee hee~ Live concerts-ish~ :D The 'bum-bumps' kinda... Hm, what's the word for it?... Rock my mind? Grah. Not good with words -.-" Anyways, awesome poem even though poems that don't rhyme has always given me this strange feeling o.o" :D

Well, more or less, I like it~ :D