Reviews for Paranormal Activity
pretty colours chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
ive read a few of ure poems but they dont seem to catch my imagination! sorry lol good poems though:)
Decoris Verbum chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Brought by the Review Marathon - link in profile.

I liked the "shh"'s, because it really made the reader feel like THEY were being spoken to. However, I didn't like how "seen" is italicized, because it seemed unnecessary to the poem as a whole.

-DV-