So cute :D I love it!

please continue this! its great!

Omgoodness I cannot get over this story, I know its complete but won't there be any continuation? I mean this is so cute. :DDDDDD Make my day!

Okay, why doesn't this have more reviews? I say it definitely deserves it.

I like the plot. And the way it was written. And the interactions between the characters. Plus, the Zack character is interesting. Very random and kind of spontaneous.

Also, I was really tempted to look up those two bands you mentioned. But then I remembered that you said you made them up. I was disappointed, haha.

Last thing: I checked your profile and I see you are/were reading Paper Towns. Good choice ;)

(Okay, last thing, really. I don't know how often you still go on, but I put you on alert just in case you come up with more interesting ideas. Sorry if you don't actually write here anymore and I'm just sending you unnecessary emails :) )

Hm, wow, normally I have some kind of criticism. None here. :P

Though, if you wanted to, you could turn the last part of the story into a bit of a cliff hanger, and turn it into the beginning of a story, it'd be doable. :P

Oh, and since you mentioned that you're up for reviewing, check out my short piece, "Together." You said you liked sappy romances. ;)

Cute! I hope she calls him...

Cool,

That's a pretty nice one shot.

But i'm more a fan of chapters and chapters

adorable.

lol. that was just too cute. Bold man indeed. ha. good one shot. ]

cool. hope there's part 2. :)

Aw, that was really cute.

I liked the endings and the characters. They were definitely believable. I could see something this happening in real life. Zack also reminds me of someone I know. Haha. :P

hahah. awe that was so cute. :D

Cute!

This is really cute. I would be kind of freaking out if some random guy started hitting on me in a music store...or much less anywhere else.

i love this story! ]

especially how shes playing all'hard to get' and how he keeps trying no matter what

good work!