I forgot! I had one thing, I really wanted to know Asher's story, I feel like there is something behind him, abuse or something that really justifies him. Not the dick attitude at the town Christmas thing but everything else. And the fact Raelyn never saw a dad leads me to that more. Maybe you could do a side story on Asher? Just a thought. XD

I loved this story, i read it in less then 24 hrs! I only feel bad I didn't see this while you were doing it to help support you. :(

I LOVED this story! Yeah, I know I'm late on this, haha. But I loved it anyways :)

Now you have to readers :D and I think this story is awesome :)

Hey,

I'm sorry I just started reading at fictionpress lately, so I didn't find your story before this afternoon. (It's half past one a.m. now and I know I'm going to hate me for doing this today at work, but it was so worth reading it!) I'm glad I read it because it's well-written and most of the characters are totally cute. And even if I never seem to manage writing them in my own stories I'm a total sucker for romance and happy endings. Do you know these days when you desperatly NEED reading something that's happy and cute? Well, tonight was one of them. So thank you for pretty much saving my life tonight! ;)

Wow - I'm really surprised you don't have more reviews. This story could've maybe been developed a bit more and been longer, but it's really wonderful. I enjoyed reading it, and liked Rae a lot as a female protagonist. Usually I hate all of those. lol. ) And if you do decide to edit this story, NEVER CHANGE ETHAN. He is a wonderful, fantastic character, and I'm not just saying that because he's the love interest. P He is a great (fictional) human being, and I would love to have him even as a friend in real life. But anyway - this story is very good, and I wish you luck in editing the others. )

i liked this :D it has a disney feel to it, but it's more realistic. i love how you kept the number of characters to a minimum and how you've kept the story at a good pace. i hate it when stories drag until forever.

nice work!:D

this was really good! an i loved perfectly starcrossed

I think you're right, this story does deserve a fluffy ending and i was so sweet :)

Anyway, I really liked the plot of it, and the fact that it wasn't too longwinded and the characters were awesome too. Anyway loved the story and good luck with your other ones :)

I know you're looking for constructive criticism and all that - but I just wanted to offer this: i loved it! im not sure I would change anything! (Besides some punctuation )

the difference between the sex scenes with Asher and then Ethan - the literature was just like I imagined the actual happening would be: with Asher, quick and blunt and with Ethan - (obviously) awesome! lol

LOVED IT! going to be following along with Sweet is Revenge as soon as I find it, no promises on the comments but I'll try!

-adoring reader

They are really cute together. I still can't hate Asher there is just something about him. He may have been a bad influance for her but he kind of seems a little broken and lost like she was. So that means there is hope for him too. I really enjoyed your story. Good Job.

Good, solid ending. No loose ends. I liked it. :)

Sex scenes CAN be tricky to write, but this particular story didn't need one that was graphic, in my opinion. It came out pretty damn well. If you ever have lemon troubles in the future, call me up, I'm good at them! ;D

Fantastic! I'm all caught up now, and I must say i'm joyfully impressed! I'm glad how you're pushing through this even though you're interest in the story is waning, it's as great as ever!

WHO! love these two chapters. ethan is so great! and i am happy to know what he has gone thru. I mean its horrible-but at least i got a back story. i look forward to more chapters!