|Reviews for A Minor Difference|
| fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Wow, that's such an original thought xD Never noticed that they look the same...
And I guess I kind of know how that feels. Similar on the outside, but there's a fundamental different that keeps you wondering.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I like the title. It really adds something to the piece. How the difference is so minor yet it can make you feel so very different and alone. I also really like the metaphor here. It's very relateable and well done.
The only thing is the way you describe it with words like alone, tall and proud are a bit cliched. Also, I don't really understand why it would be standing proud and tall if it feels alone and different. That seemed a bit contradictory.
Still, really nice piece.
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| Militant Poet chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Sometimes it's nice to be the sunflower. Very sweet poem.
| GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
I love the comparison you made with the daises and sunflower.
It's short and simple, but full of meaning.
And there's nothing wrong with being a sunflower. God loves you just the way you are. You're 100 percent unique...just like everybody else:)
Write on, 'cause you've got what it takes!