I have vague guarded admiration to fiction that contain incest. Okay, just fictions you've write. Perhaps because you made it seems real enough. While the Kaoru/Hikaru from Ouran high school host club seemed like a parody, because they act that way while not being actually twincest.
*nervous laugh*

I really enjoyed reading this! It was totally crazy and kool, and it definitely intrigued me about your other stories. I like Dexter's character a lot, and he was so very cute with Richard! A little Electra complex going on there, but I like that he realized it wasn't going to work. It sucked that the reason for that had to be that his parents still slept together after a divorce...but it was definitely a good story, and I'm eager to read more of your stuff now!(:

wasn't expecting the bit with his dad, but it was a good twist, there are so many fics out there with abusive fathers but to have the son in love with his dad was different i relay liked it.

You ask at the end if your readers are surprised, well yes, I was.

Dex deserves some happiness and I don't think it was ever going to happen with his father. He has user written all over him and the fact that Dex has taken the first step in breaking away from him in whatever form is encouraging.

I really liked the way you wrote. You have clear concise words, excellently structured and you write in such a way that paints very clear word pictures. There is crispness in the language you use and I was very engaged and cared about Dex.

Be lovely to read more, realistically I should imagine there won't be more of this story but one can hope.

Thank you for this glimpse into your imagination. Most edifying.

D: shocking, kinda appalling. I liked DG... but the thing with the dad was disturbing...

I was not at all expecting that kiss with his dad. It really skeeved me out. His dad is an ass simply for leading him on like that.

At least he found Richard, because Dex is really cool and deserves to be happy. Hopefully Richard can help Dex get over his father.

man, I have to be honest that I was shocked and slightly horrified at that first line where he kissed his dad.

But it's interesting to see it from this perspective instead of always the minor victem and the pedophile.

Electra complex with a boy instead of a girl?

Anyway, aside from this piece of writing and a few others, I really enjoy your way of writing and what you write.

I really love the dirtiness and imperfection, it's perfect in its way!

This story is so complicated as are my feelings about it.

His dad is a jerk no matter how nice he really is. As a person raised in a house where a child was molested, I practically jumped for joy when Dexter gave up on his dad. You made it all feel so good and natural when I knew it wasn't, that the feeling Dex had were hurting him.

Yeah for Richard, who is wonderful just by being himself.

loved it.

I was reading this when the story suddenly ended half-way through like in the middle of a sentence. It confused me for a minute before I realized it didn't upload all the way. So I clicked 'refresh' and got to finish the story! Yay. lol. I didn't see anything wrong grammer-wise (or plot-wise ) but you know how I am with grammer...

*pur* love! *sigh* love his persona and how he doesn't hold it against his dad in the end, richard sounds fun to! some kind of sequal please?

Dexter is a cool cat. Always has been, always will be. Let's hope things go well for him and Richard. Yeah, I remember this one.

Wow this is a good one you should totally continue it :)

Aw. poor guy. that must be devastating.

brilliant writing, once again.

AH! UPDATE!

I love this.

Slightly dusturbing and hits too close to home but...LOVE IT!