That can't be the ending! I want her to Grey! She can be grown up and be with Grey! Good job on ur story! :)

I absolutely love this story, and I was hoping that you'd continue with it in a new story, with Ellie and Grey. I must admit, I got a little teary-eyed when she broke it off with him, and when her mother told her that he'd given her magic.

A part that I loved in this, would have to be when he told her that he was fae, not a faggot, when she mentioned the sparkling - your Twilight reference. :) It made me laugh, and in turn, made my night.

You're very good at writing, so keep up the good work :)

:o so interesting!

I only wish I could have found this story sooner so I could have reviewed & you could have gotten yourself ice cream.

I really liked the story but, does it really end like THAT? Her and Grey HAVE to get together- he was so good for and to her!

Omg i hope and honestly hope yu dont stop writing this, i mean the sequal, its just to good. This story has so much potential and quite frankly the story is amazing! I cried three times into the story. When Hels died when Elli leaves Grey and when she sees the box and the ripped post it, and now the end, well that makes it four times. Plz plz plz and im begging yu, do not stop writing the sequal im like a yu dont even know i was up until 5am reading .cudnt finish so up and finished it now and im sad and anxious and excited along with frustrated and downright scared that yu wont complete the sequal... but overall i just wanted to compliment yu on an amazing story! continue ill be yur loyal loving and reviewing fan if yu do :) oh and is it okay if i link yur story on my profile? And ill have frends read this aswell cuz .they will love it!

Yur loving and adoring fan..

Ariyah :D

I just wanted to say that I really, really enjoyed your story, just everything about it. Your storyline makes sense, there is no random things, everything bad which happen had a reason, it wasn't put in just to make your story sadder. So: good work! :)

Even though the ending was sad, I think it was a good place to finish, otherwise it would be like there was no boundary between her old life and her new one. I can't wait for the sequel and I really hope you can get it up soon!

beautiful

gah, what's gonna hapen? i'm scared of what she's gonna say!

i hate cliffhangers!:(

i love this story please update soon!

no! make grey come and heal her, please! don't make her diee! i'm gonna be depressed the rest of the day noww! *sob*

im sad. *sniffle

i either need ice cream or a quick update to replenish my happiness. or both. please?

OMG i was sad and shocked to read what happened to Helena. Is there a chance that she could survive if they changed her. Oh and will there be a sequel. I hope so.

go get yourself some ice cream. that's an order, not a request. and your story is freaking awesome. so there. ICE CREAM TIME!

Oh my gosh...are you kidding me? Do please update soon. I want to know what's going to happen between Ariana and Helaena. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. _

I'm glad everything is going alright, I hope everything remains that way.

Can't wait to read more - please update soon :)