Hey, i really hope you would write another chapter. This is the first story I read when I first visited Fictionpress and its still my favorite followed by Rough Petals. All I want to way is, PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Thks. Apologies if you find this offensive or whatsoever.

I love love love this story so far!

I think its hard to find really good stories on here and this is one of the few.

Kep up the good work and update ASAP!

Oh, and buy yourself some damn ice cream. :)

Oh, the drama! I hate cliff-hangers :( Anyway, be safe, can't wait til next chapter.

Wow, I'm surprised that this story has only gotten 17 reviews. It's really interesting and lacking in a lot of the grammatical errors that I've seen in most other stories. I've only read up to chapter 15 due to a lack of time at the moment to read the rest and I can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us. I definately think that you should eat more ice cream, though. My only problem with Eleanora is that she got a Grey and the rest of us are being left without one! Where can I find my own Grey? Very good story, I can't wait until I have time to read he rest!

Whoa, this is getting intense. I totally just spent my evening reading your story, and I have to say, it was fun. I like both of the main characters and the story is interesting. If I had to offer up any advice, I would say that I would have preferred if they had taken it a little bit slower. Their relationship seemed a bit rushed. Also, what was the Johnny Darko reference about in the last chapter? And that's about it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is interesting I like it. Please keep up the good work.

She better tell Grey what happened! I'll die if she lies.

Great chapter!

I loved this chapter - I really want to start crying tears of joy, she escaped but it was almost too easy for her. I'm sure those vampires won't let her get away that easily just after they'd finally found her.

Please update soon!

Holy crap.

The last bit was intense.

You must get the next chapter up!

I love the cliff hangers.

Amazing work.

Man, this stories awesome!

Some bits could be a little more descriptive, but its just awesome!

Good work!

Bleh, I can't read chpt 25 yet :( Really have to go!

Couldn't she have just cast a spell to hide the ring. At least she'd then have some sort or backup plan. I really hope she'll be alright.

Please update soon :)

it would be SO sad if Ellie dies while her and Grey haven't "kissed and made-up" yet..

anyway, wow, such a surprising turn of events.. what ring did Ellie blow up anyway?

I wonder what she wants to talk to her about. I hope it's about her father - I really want to know who he is. I'm surprised they had an argument over something so trivial - and isn't Greyson supposed to be staying at home, not going out drinking?

Please update soon! :D

Hey there...

it's a really nice story!

please update soon!

Oh I LOVE YOUR STORY! It's so sweet the relationship they have with each other. She hasn't confronted Grey about the things she apparently didn't know about herself that he refered to in the park. I wonder who her father is - ahh this is great, your story is really well written, the characters are well composed and thought out and your story is intruinging.

I can't wait for another chapter - Update soon please! :D