Reviews for A New Faery Tale
starrybutter21 chapter 28 . 5/7/2009
Hey, i really hope you would write another chapter. This is the first story I read when I first visited Fictionpress and its still my favorite followed by Rough Petals. All I want to way is, PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Thks. Apologies if you find this offensive or whatsoever.
Lecczii chapter 28 . 4/23/2009
I love love love this story so far!

I think its hard to find really good stories on here and this is one of the few.

Kep up the good work and update ASAP!

Oh, and buy yourself some damn ice cream. :)
Cirya chapter 28 . 4/22/2009
Oh, the drama! I hate cliff-hangers :( Anyway, be safe, can't wait til next chapter.
Anastasia Victoria Stockwell chapter 15 . 4/20/2009
Wow, I'm surprised that this story has only gotten 17 reviews. It's really interesting and lacking in a lot of the grammatical errors that I've seen in most other stories. I've only read up to chapter 15 due to a lack of time at the moment to read the rest and I can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us. I definately think that you should eat more ice cream, though. My only problem with Eleanora is that she got a Grey and the rest of us are being left without one! Where can I find my own Grey? Very good story, I can't wait until I have time to read he rest!
Cirya chapter 27 . 4/9/2009
Whoa, this is getting intense. I totally just spent my evening reading your story, and I have to say, it was fun. I like both of the main characters and the story is interesting. If I had to offer up any advice, I would say that I would have preferred if they had taken it a little bit slower. Their relationship seemed a bit rushed. Also, what was the Johnny Darko reference about in the last chapter? And that's about it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
caw122182 chapter 26 . 3/26/2009
This is interesting I like it. Please keep up the good work.
WWFF chapter 26 . 3/25/2009
She better tell Grey what happened! I'll die if she lies.

Great chapter!
XxSiennaxX chapter 26 . 3/25/2009
I loved this chapter - I really want to start crying tears of joy, she escaped but it was almost too easy for her. I'm sure those vampires won't let her get away that easily just after they'd finally found her.

Please update soon!
WWFF chapter 25 . 3/23/2009
Holy crap.

The last bit was intense.

You must get the next chapter up!

I love the cliff hangers.

Amazing work.
WWFF chapter 24 . 3/23/2009
Man, this stories awesome!

Some bits could be a little more descriptive, but its just awesome!

Good work!

Bleh, I can't read chpt 25 yet :( Really have to go!
XxSiennaxX chapter 25 . 3/22/2009
Couldn't she have just cast a spell to hide the ring. At least she'd then have some sort or backup plan. I really hope she'll be alright.

Please update soon :)
Sapphyre Nymph chapter 25 . 3/22/2009
it would be SO sad if Ellie dies while her and Grey haven't "kissed and made-up" yet..

anyway, wow, such a surprising turn of events.. what ring did Ellie blow up anyway?
XxSiennaxX chapter 24 . 3/21/2009
I wonder what she wants to talk to her about. I hope it's about her father - I really want to know who he is. I'm surprised they had an argument over something so trivial - and isn't Greyson supposed to be staying at home, not going out drinking?

Please update soon! :D
Sapphyre Nymph chapter 23 . 3/9/2009
Hey there...

it's a really nice story!

please update soon!
XxSiennaxX chapter 23 . 3/5/2009
Oh I LOVE YOUR STORY! It's so sweet the relationship they have with each other. She hasn't confronted Grey about the things she apparently didn't know about herself that he refered to in the park. I wonder who her father is - ahh this is great, your story is really well written, the characters are well composed and thought out and your story is intruinging.

I can't wait for another chapter - Update soon please! :D
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