|Reviews for A New Faery Tale|
| Kyrina chapter 20 . 2/13/2009
naw, sweet story, i love it, good job. Update soon please!
| Evanescent.Sight chapter 14 . 2/1/2009
hey i love your story
its really original not to mention it has great imagery
i loved the scene when she first enters the f.a.e building
| Ayla Gray chapter 10 . 1/23/2009
this was pretty good, i cant wait to see what happens with them
| Jane's Eyes of Horus chapter 10 . 1/23/2009
You're story is coming along well. I'm enjoying reading it. It's well written but I'd try not to rely too much or any more on dialogue. Not that you're doing that; I'm just saying. The only real critism I have would be longer chapters. Don't fall into the trap that one event equals one chapter. Expand. It may take longer to get a chapter out but it'll be worth it. I'm not sure if I helped any but...yeah. Keep up the good work.
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 4 . 1/19/2009
hope you update soon
| Freshman2008 chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
WHOA! please keep writing! its SO different from anything i've ever read and its really interesting! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! i'd really appreciate it lol :) but seriously it was really good and u have an awesome range of vocabulary so keep writing! :)