Reviews for Coats and Subways |
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![]() ![]() Loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waaaah this was really good ! Stranger turn to lover so easily haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was intriguing...I wonder just who Ryan Carlisle was... |
![]() ![]() You are sooo unfair! Aaahhh, I won't ask who he was, cause I'm sure you wouldn't say it anyway. I really liked the story. The plot is nice and the story is well written (not that I'm an expert, but I really liked it). I normally don't review, but I just had to this time. Hope you keep writting! :D |
![]() ![]() You left it to my imagination, she just got murdered in my head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! :D So cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOO, I NEED to know who he was! Your story is amazing, for once I am satisfied with just a one-shot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really enjoyed this one-shot! Actually it's probably the best I've read in quite a while. I liked how it wasn't typically fluffy as stories tend to be as well as Ryan's enigmatic persona. Your ending leaves me wondering what Ryan's back story is. Your oneshot could very well become a complete story- I would definitely love to read it if you choose to continue! Keep itup:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man! I have less than no imagination the reason for his bizzare behaviour will forever be unexplained to me. Having said that I absolutely loved this which is unusual as I tend to struggle to find one shots satisfying, they normally leave me with too many questions but this one got the balance just right u think, great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how you ended it. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I love that you didn't actually answer the question of who he was. Nice one :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this is something unique. ;) Love it and hate it for being such a tease. Its good. YOU're good. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! Cute! Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I can't help but feel cheated. Ryan being followed is a huge plot point-it's what sets up the whole dang thing-but you never explain it. Instead there's a long list of her infatuation with the guy...who cares? Of course, I could be missing the point, considering my limited patience with romances. |