|Reviews for Twinkle twinkle upon the snow|
| Omok chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
You actually write...
you never told me...
Don't tell me: Oh, I was waiting for you to find out.
Well, I HATE CHU! you should've told me! T-T;
YOU SHOULD WRITE A STORY :D WITH YOUR BRILLIANT MIND :D you can come up with something AMAZING :D HM? how about it? :D
(yeah...meh no big fan of poems. so me no read them. No often at least. me no bad. me good.)
| Indian Shell chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Told ya I'd make a FictionPress ONE day.
| bloodyfangs chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Well done, Sam. :) I love how your poems tell a story.
I only saw one thing that needed to be edited "Most of the do but some of them miss" I assume the 'the' should be a them?
"Dont get mad. Get even." lol I use that line.
| sneekie chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
You wrote this in bed and what were you thinking about. I hope you had good dreams that night, ha. I like this one
| A Little Less Than Dust chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
An absolutely amazing poem! Great job! -
| Rawkin Paradox chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I can so see this happening.
Only, I'd let you get in a snowball or two. ]
And and and this was love.
It's...yeah. I love it. D
| 96NESSA chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Wow i wish i could write as well as you! Awesome and. . . well wow.