I know I'm basically talking to a wall, as this account seems to be abandoned, but I wanted to let it out.

Gonna be real, killing Aurelia probably pissed me off more than it made me sad. If they had confessed to each other before Aurelia died, this ending would have been much more impactful. I really don't like how they revealed they made wishes on the night of their birthday, but you didn't show us that. It feels like you didn't know how to explain why they just fell in love with each other. You could have wrote that they had loved each other for years, but didn't know what kind of love it was, which you kind of got into but basically did nothing with.

I feel that if the sequel was made that starred another incarnation of these two, it would be alright. But seeing as this is a story with a definitive end, it's just bad. I feel like I just wasted my time.

Best story ever!

Fuck
Shit
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Please bring back aurelia

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please post the sequel, or at least say something to let us know you are still alive lol

Wow, I dont understand why this doesn't have more reviews. Great story! Loved it! Hope youre still considering writing that sequel!

I finally found this story again after so long. :')
I've literally spent days looking for 'Otherworldly' when I vaguely remembered the story while I was drawing (Lol I don't know why).

For some CRAZY reason, it wasn't on my favorites list even though this is like, one of my most fav femslash stories on this site. It was one of the first femslash stories I read after discovering FictionPress.

Anyways, just wanted to tell you how awesome I think this story is! Hope you can finish the next one soon! :)

Great story, I would love a sequel. Their next reincarnation maybe, some quality time between them possibly.

if you do a sequel, how would you make it. i mean since Aurelia is gone. unless its something else your thinking of. great story and i hope you will think of a sequel.

I started reading this a few days ago. I must say it was a well written story and would love to see more. It was also incredibly touching. I'm holding back tears as I type this. The emotions of anger, sadness, regret, and acceptness in this story just made me feel more connected to the charcters. So I can easily say this is one of the best stories I have ever read. So without further delay I have but one more thing to say: HURRY UP AND FINISH THE SEQUEL BEFORE I COMPLETELY LOSE THE LAST OF MY SANITY! Don't rush though. I will patiently wait.-SZ

This is a good story it had me on tears this the Capitulus XVIII. I would like if you'd make a sequel, for it's not fair that after they got together Lux & Tenebrae had to separate :'( I'd want to see how can it be when they reunite (if they do which i'm sure of), the newest perils and adventures they must face.

Great story and that takes a lot to do it so skillfully.

9.9/10 if we could score this but chapter 18 is an 11/10

Oh my god, why! Why did you have to kill her? I'm literally crying here. I thought this was gonna be a happy ending! *sniff*

In chapter 17, you meant to write "runes" instead of "ruins" at this part right?

"White ruins could be found written on the blades of the staff, and it glowed an illuminating blue."

I feel like this whole story is like a romantic rpg written in story form. And I loved it.

I wonder what'll happen in the sequel. Can't wait for it.

Oh god, the girls keeps getting interrupted at an intimate moment.

Great story. You have me wondering a few chapters ago when they were going to kiss and whatnot.

No typos so yay!

Wow this was an amazing story, I couldn't sleep till I finished this story. Though I didn't like that you killed Aurelia. Same thing had happened in another story I'd read recently. But none the less it was one of the best I've ever read. I can'r wait to read the sequel.

OH MY GOSH! I knw it's like two years late! But this was awesome! I cried so hard at the end! :( I really loved the story. I just wish that she didn't die!

ow...sad...but beautiful, I hope you're working on a sequel. Aurelia deserves a chance at being loved just as much.

Your fantasy world was wonderful, filled with scary, torn and noble creatures.

Thank you so much for sharing,