Reviews for Snippet
SnowyAshCat chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
The first chapter was a good interesting little scene that was very descriptive and mystical.

But the second chapter is one that I would love to see made into a full story. I'm really interested in how you would continue it, cuz it could go in so many ways... :) Would you please consider it and post it on FictionPress if you ever do write more for it?
Me Again chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
That was really gorgeous. Loved all the images in this, really. _
Narc chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
This is a great description of a simple scene. I loved the imagery of the fire and wind mixed together. It almost seemed as if you were describing something magical, rather than physical.

There were a couple lines that sounded a bit corny to me. 'Grace personified' was one of those. I thought that something like that was better seen just through the description of her movements. You do a good job of describing those, so there's no real reason to say something like 'she was grace personified'. We get that image already.

For the review marathon! (There's a link to it in my profile).