Reviews for But A Scar
BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Sad. I would suggest trying to stay away from the single word lines cus they make the peom choppy. Still really good tho. :)

rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Amazing title, it's very intriguing. I love "Promises mean nothing. As do I." part, that was my favorite, and i really like the concept of this one, it's very deep and powerful.. Nice work.. :)

DiaRose chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
This is much better! Very nice, you're not just stating simple facts, but writing poetry! This is lovely, very nicely done