Reviews for All I Ever Wanted
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Very nice start to it. I like the questioning going on and the short sentences leave a lot of impact. My favorite part was the ending line. Wow, this whole thing is just amazing.

DiaRose chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Aw, so sad. This is pretty, the flow is a little bit off, but I like this. I'd like to see you expand on ideas like this so that you can give us information in a poetic form. You are starting to do that already, but you could build on that a lot. I think with practice you'll be a really talented poet.