Reviews for Holding On
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Woah. This peice has a lot of feeling. It's really depressing. I loved the idea that used the whole holding on theme. This was awesome. :)

Rolliepollie44
DiaRose chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Now this one is nice! My only problem: the beginning. You use the same one a lot, maybe for the future think of another way to say that? Anyway, I love this poem, great flow, almost rhyming, lovely, steady rythm. I love it, and the message is very nice! Metaphor! I love it.

Love,

Dia