Reviews for Waiting
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
The beginning was very interesting, by using my wrist weeps instead of like bleeds, and how you consider blood, tears of red. I really really like that. Again with the really great usage of short choppy lines, they really bring impact! Great job! :)
DiaRose chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Now this one I love, especially the beginning! that's what I mean by reflecting yourself as a poet, you used your words to reflect the mood of the situation. You could have said your wrist bleeds, but that would not be as sad as the image you have painted here. Lovely.