Reviews for A Letter
BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Wow. Really deep but really good at the same time. Love your poetry!

RosePetal
JGPoetry chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
"And it shows me how far I still have to fall..." Beautiful. As usual, nice work. :)
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Wow. This is sort of what I feel sometimes, you've captured that well on this.
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
"[...]It only shows me how far I've fallen while jumping for your goals."

I love that:) Very nice. And the last line was great, too. It's kind of like bitter acceptance.

Keep it up:)
Then They call me M chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
woah, man, nice. i can totally relate to this with the grades and parents and all that. Nicely done. : )
DiaRose chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Wow! Very nice. This has real feeling in it, nothing fabricated, nothing but the truth, and yet you were able to use pretty words to sum up the feeling further than the basic, frank wording you use in some of your poems. This is lovely.

Love,

Dia