Reviews for The Rules of Engagement
summers-end chapter 21 . 6/7/2009
Good ending but is the sequel going to be a separate story since this was an epilogue?

Szeto chapter 21 . 6/7/2009
as much as i usually love epilogues and continuations of stories that i like, i didn't really like this epilogue. in the case that you would write a sequel, i was looking forward to reading about the struggle that dorianant would have to go through while dorian was away, and the relationship issues that would have come up.

in any case, i'm glad this story will go on, even if it's not the way i wanted it to. update soon!

Szeto chapter 20 . 6/7/2009
i just finished reading the entire story, and i must say this chapter is by far my favorite! i actually started crying, which goes to show you just how much i was affected by your writing.

my favorite moments:

1. the paragraph describing antdorian's hands when they were holding hands in the car, and how that was a metaphor for their relationship. that was so touching!

2. perry describing the significance of the dog tags. so romantic!

on a side note, i really like everyone's names in this story. ant, dorian and perry are certainly unique. i'm hoping you continue on with this story and make a sequel!

and i really love bed scenes. (not necessarily the smutty bits, but just the simple act of sleeping together in the same bed) i think they're so sweet and uber romantic. it makes me mushy inside.

Violet Thelaw chapter 21 . 6/5/2009
a soldier sharing a final moment with his sweetheart - Man I just love that line! I'd just like to say that. XD
RomeLi chapter 21 . 6/4/2009
Really liked this wrap up chapter; can't wait to see the sequel!
Violet Thelaw chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
OK, one last.

Man, I would have loved the ending to be different! But I'm a sucker for romance with happy endings after all. Maybe I'd like it to be different so I wouldn't cry so much! You have no idea how I was depressed that it took me a bowl of ice cream and candies and She's The Man to get myself normal again!

Oh, I dunno if I've said this in the first review...but can you please send me the extra scene? XD I'd love to read more of DORIAN AND ANT! By the way, I love their names! All of them! Especially Dorian! It suits him well. :)

And...umm...if it's not so stupid to suggest...

Violet Thelaw chapter 20 . 6/3/2009
OH MY GOSH! You have NO idea how I loved this story SO MUCH! It was one of the few that made me actually cry! I love love love Ant and Dorian and I practically squealed aloud when I saw that there was an EPILOGUE! I also saw in an author's note that you still have an extra scene. Can you send it to me, please? :)
M.S.S92 chapter 21 . 6/3/2009
hey God girl what are you doin now you HAVE to write another sequel... what will happen now? why did her father call her? You just have to write another one. chapter 21 . 6/2/2009
Okay first of all I LOVE this story! I am actually planning on joining the Marine Corps next year so I won't lie it made this story so much better for me ha ha. One thing I'd like to point out is in the epilogue you said he had his "Army" bag over his shoulder. He's a Marine he wouldn't have an army bag. But regardless this story is one of the best I've read so far. I love the way the two of them act around each other. Can't wait for the sequel. D You['re an amazing writer.
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 21 . 6/1/2009
i really enjoyed this story.
bec1246 chapter 3 . 6/1/2009
e i went to choate! class of 08!
foxycometwong chapter 21 . 6/1/2009
Oh...way to have a killer epilogue! Hah! What a homecoming present! And a cliffie! I smell sequel in the air love...hahaha...I love this..I think I've told you this already...Hope it (sequel) comes out soon...I'll be waiting...

Until then, my regards to Dorian and Ant. And to you too!

muchmusiclove chapter 21 . 5/31/2009
Thank you SO much for updating

it made my day

i'm glad its continuing
nix chapter 21 . 5/31/2009
you just had to leave us hanging in the air! lol!

your story's just..AWESOME!

so PLEASE update already!
GNIP chapter 21 . 5/30/2009
omg that's so cruel, leaving us with a cliffie (
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