Reviews for The Rules of Engagement
Lady R chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
OMG, OMG, OMG, I just love you for continually this story! This was such a nice surprise! I had to do a double take when I received the alert email just to make sure. This was very, very good! But what does that mean by eventually? You can't just leave us hanging like that! LOL
Breck Colleen chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
Oh, oh! I just stumbled across this story last night and I loved it. Imagine my surprise and delight when, coming to leave a comment today, I found the epilogue. Simply wonderful. I'm looking forward to an eventual sequel!

I didn't see an author's note about it, but this *is* loosely based on P&P, right? If so, this is one of the nicest adaptations I've read, and I've read quite a few. :)

Oh, and a brief, picky note: in the second paragraph of the Epilogue (and I think somewhere else in the story), Ant's head felt "feint" but I think faint is the correct spelling for what you mean.
KariandTK chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
wow. I'm glad that he got home okay. It's sad for the rest of his unit. She's going to go meet her biological father?
bianca08 chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
Oh my, i really wasnt expecting this chapter, but am really glad for it anyway. That was an amazing ending to the first part of the story, and im so happy that (i think) you are writing a sequel. Best of luck with it and looking forward to it!
M M chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
Glad you added the epilogue. Can't wait for the next story.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
thats...thats...EVIL

you cant end it this way

i forbid it!

you cant do this NO!

you need to do a seqeul and fast

it should be longer too
ShrimpoJewels chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
Yay for Dorian's return...I hope he isn't too bad off or that he doesn't have PTSD or that he gets help soon...
sayitstrue chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
You're back! Thank God you're back. There's been a lack of good fiction around here. Please, please, please update son. I can't wait to see where this goes. I can't wait to see more Ant/Dorian. Thanks!
Jevanminx chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
Well damn, that was good.

JM
ddz008 chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
It was a extremely sweet reunion, I fell in love with Dorian even more XD It was so sad... that his unit was ambushed but it's something that just happens in that line of work. I wonder what have you planned for a sequel, Ant's biological father? Dorian with PTSD? And... they finally said 'I love you'. Hope to hear from you soon! Reading this story was really enjoyable! :)
Kyrii chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
Oh, my gosh, oh, my gosh, oh, my gosh! WRITE LIKE MAD PERSON! OR I SHALL BE FORCED TO COME AFTER YOU!
chng234 chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
finally dorian is back... glad that he is alive n not in depression... i guess everything is good between ant n dorian. will there be a sequel?
Ravina chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
I don't like that word..."eventually". But that's only because you're withholding your lovely writing...

I loved this story, so I'm glad to see a little more of it! :)

- Rebekah
g chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
what is the matter with you teasing me like that! That TBC eventually better not be too long down the road.
JC23polyanthus chapter 21 . 5/29/2009
are you making a sequel 2 this story under da same name?
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