Reviews for The Rules of Engagement |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, OMG, OMG, I just love you for continually this story! This was such a nice surprise! I had to do a double take when I received the alert email just to make sure. This was very, very good! But what does that mean by eventually? You can't just leave us hanging like that! LOL |
![]() ![]() Oh, oh! I just stumbled across this story last night and I loved it. Imagine my surprise and delight when, coming to leave a comment today, I found the epilogue. Simply wonderful. I'm looking forward to an eventual sequel! I didn't see an author's note about it, but this *is* loosely based on P&P, right? If so, this is one of the nicest adaptations I've read, and I've read quite a few. :) Oh, and a brief, picky note: in the second paragraph of the Epilogue (and I think somewhere else in the story), Ant's head felt "feint" but I think faint is the correct spelling for what you mean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. I'm glad that he got home okay. It's sad for the rest of his unit. She's going to go meet her biological father? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, i really wasnt expecting this chapter, but am really glad for it anyway. That was an amazing ending to the first part of the story, and im so happy that (i think) you are writing a sequel. Best of luck with it and looking forward to it! |
![]() ![]() Glad you added the epilogue. Can't wait for the next story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats...thats...EVIL you cant end it this way i forbid it! you cant do this NO! you need to do a seqeul and fast it should be longer too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for Dorian's return...I hope he isn't too bad off or that he doesn't have PTSD or that he gets help soon... |
![]() ![]() You're back! Thank God you're back. There's been a lack of good fiction around here. Please, please, please update son. I can't wait to see where this goes. I can't wait to see more Ant/Dorian. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well damn, that was good. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a extremely sweet reunion, I fell in love with Dorian even more XD It was so sad... that his unit was ambushed but it's something that just happens in that line of work. I wonder what have you planned for a sequel, Ant's biological father? Dorian with PTSD? And... they finally said 'I love you'. Hope to hear from you soon! Reading this story was really enjoyable! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my gosh, oh, my gosh, oh, my gosh! WRITE LIKE MAD PERSON! OR I SHALL BE FORCED TO COME AFTER YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally dorian is back... glad that he is alive n not in depression... i guess everything is good between ant n dorian. will there be a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like that word..."eventually". But that's only because you're withholding your lovely writing... I loved this story, so I'm glad to see a little more of it! :) - Rebekah |
![]() ![]() what is the matter with you teasing me like that! That TBC eventually better not be too long down the road. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you making a sequel 2 this story under da same name? |