hes a dickhead. how old are they?

wow the story is so sensual, the emotions here are so real and don't get me started on the ending..my God, i'll be dreaming of this wonderful story:) the ending is so...unbelievable! made my heart flutter:)

wow...this was amazing! . I think I woke up my whole neighborhood with my fangirl squealing xD but yeah, this really was an 'omg' story definately adding to my faves )

I loved the ending! Of course, now I feel sad, but I'm glad that you made it realistic (not all relationships end up perfectly happily ever aftery).

Great story!

~ Tigery

make a 2nd one! woot woot.. when he comes home :0

that was smashing!

Aw

That was so freaking sweet

I loved this

Wow

U should write a sequal!

Anyway. Good job

X

i don't remember if i left a comment the first time i read this. But even after my 2nd time, it still brings me to tears :'( ahh i love this story. Great Job !

I LOVE this story. When I started reading it, my Infantry boyfriend was doing final deployment training, and now my Infantry husband is deployed. Reading this has been a bittersweet ride at times. I'm relatively young, and Kim scares me a little. But reading about Ant and Dorian made me so happy, and towards the end when they're talking, I cried a little because it reminded me of so many things, and when he looks back at her with the dogtags, I laughed and was warm and fuzzy and happy. So thank you for the ride. Your writing has been a big comfort to me, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Hope to read more soon,

sincerely, Katie.

Wow, people like you make me wonder why I even try writing. This story was beautiful, the words flow as if they're meant to be that way; all in all, I was mesmerized by it. Keep up the good work!

Loved this story!

you do deserve an oscar! this was really good! do you know a marine or something? coz its so realistic and its completely believable...you should think abt publishing! then u can get money for all your hard work (but id appreciate a free advance copy! D) ive added u and ur story to my favvy list n ive subscribed too! i now goes to check out thine other stories! hehe

thelildeVil

Oh my... What a story... I love it. The tension. It's simple, but brilliant. Just brilliant.

I havent checked fictionpress for a very long time now -busy and all. So, I'm sort of new once again. haha.. anyways, your story was the first that i have read since i got back. and after reading it, gad! i realized how much i missed all these.

your story, the way you right is so amazing. you inspired me to continue writing. so, thank you. and keep it up!

thanks again! XD

wow! what an awesome story. I loved how there was so much going on, and all the characters had so much depth. family histories, personality, just... wow. a very complete, perfect story.

though I must say, I caught a strong pride and prejudice vibe.

Amazing story.