i loved it all!

sequel?

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This story is amazing and very realistic! You ended it in such a perfect way! Though there's that part of me that wished that you'd do an epilogue of what happens after..but I'll just have to leave my imagination to do the work haha. Thanks for sharing this story with us! I enjoyed every bit of it!

omg! i love this story. its so sweet yet so frikin sad. :( why did he have to leave? they so deserved more time together. but i hope you right an epilogue or something of his homecoming. pretty please. pretty pretty please? i'll go back and review every single chapter if you do. :P and i'm only half joking.

I love this story. Loved the dog tags, sort of sad it ended there though- recon you should have ended it with an epilogue with him coming home.

Although, still confused how the title ties in.

Very very cute! I truly loved it, you really did a great job with this story, youre obviously talented :D

I really love this story! You write these characters so well, that I really started to care about them. I almost cried halfway through this chapter, and trust me, that is quite a feat. Amazing, really. (:

No..it's finish already!Man,I'm gonna miss this story.I'll probably read it over and over again..Good job mate..I definitely enjoy it.

This is so good- I love the conspiring parents (:

It's funny to watch Dorian and Ant go at each other like that- I literally laughed out loud last chapter!

Awesome job!

THE END? WHAT?

Well I loved it!

absolutely loved it thats all i have to say! its almost six in the morning and i am still awake coz i couldnt stop reading till i finished it! u should think about doing a sequel to this story! :)

I loved this story. I think it was a good tribute the the men and women who serve our country day in and day out(even if that is not exactly how you meant it). These men and women put their lives on the line each and every day to protect our country and fight for the freedoms that we so take for granted every day- I have the utmost respect for them. I especially love how you portrayed Ant's character- how at first she was a die hard liberal, and in the end, softened her pre-concieved notions and opinions once she had the oportunity to learn more about this contraversial topic. Thank you for writing this- it really was a great story! :)

Semper Fi,

~Robyn Night~

Well, I'm satisfied you definitely wrote the whole thing beautifully, handled characters- and their interactions really well and managed to make it cliche but original in some method. :D It's a really good story. You should be proud of yourself _

I'm really liking your story so far, and it's only been two chapters! :) I'm impressed. Your writing style's really unique and natural; there were no signs of awkward pauses or repeated adjectives; and your characters, so far, seem rather unique. I especially like the contrast between Ant and Dorian and the last bit of dialogue at the end. You seem to be dealing with Dorian's issues as a Marine quite well so far, I hope the rest of this story surpass my expectations _

I absolutely adored this story, I have a love/hate relationship against the end. I thought it was near perfect buut I would LOVE if there was some sort of epilogue like them married or something equally as cute. Or even better a cute mini sequel about them separated and missing each other until he came back... But that's just my wishful thinking lol. The story was great as is :-)

haha, you certainly are ! :D

I love the story,

LOVE it !