Reviews for The Rules of Engagement
FerretsRevolution chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
The end? THE END? Okay. I've accepted that THIS story is over...which is why you need to write a sequel- or, at the very least, an epilogue. I know it will take a while. First, you'd have to finish revising this, then formulating a whole new story, and all these other processes I really don't feel like naming, but please, please, please, PLEASE consider a sequel. This is a pretty nice ending though. I thought it was a perfect ending for the chapter and I was so excited about reading your next update...until I realized it was the end. I wanted to cry. The story is really great overall, but you can't just end a story (especially a romance story) with emotions completely unresolved/unidentified like this. They don't know if they love each other...or are just inlike...or many things...

The ending is too...cliffy. The only cliffy ending I liked was Steinbeck's 'The Grapes of Wrath'- but at least the story line foreshadowed the really cliff-like ending. Also, the cliff-y ending had a reason- to spark anger. This story raised my hopes only to crush them into dust...for no reason (which is completely unfair, in my opinion) so I command you (!) to write a sequel before...before something BAD happens. (!)

Emilea chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
Gosh I want a sequel seriously. Or an epilogue. Yes please to an epilogue.
BluE MooN CRUM chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
I REALLY liked your story! I would not change anything.

BUT please write an epiloge soon!
Asha R Patel chapter 20 . 2/26/2009

I've been reading this for awhile and eagerly awaiting your updates. The story was amazing, i love the characters and the way that you've ended the story. It's not unrealistic and i think that that alone is amazing Anyway i'm hoping you'll write a sequel, i would love to see what happens when Dorian comes back home.


MissMouse chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
THE END? you cant leave it hanging like that!
xoxhp chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
HOLY COW! This story is not done. It cannot be done. It just can't. Well, it sort of has to because what will Ant do for another couple of years? But omg. I cannot believe this is done - I swear to god this has to be my favorite story - of all the millions I've read. It was SO GOOD. Ant and Dorian are my all time favorite couple. You have no idea how honored I am to have read this lol, you've changed my perspective on military men! It takes a lot for them to leave their lives to go and serve their country. And seriously. I can't stop saying this but I loved this story. I probably sound like a little 2 year old or something but wow. Can you at least write an epilogue? Of what will happen in the future? Anything. I just simply can't say goodbye to this story! AAH. Thanks again, I'm so honored to read this.
Lady R chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
This was so amazing! And I totally loved how you ended it! Just the way I thought it would end. Sad, but hopeful. The little humor at the end was brillant. I can't possibly see how you could improve on this, but I will definitely check back, because I just fell in love with Ant and Dorian. Seriously, one of my favorite stories thus far! BTW, what happened to Perry's boyfriend? He kinda just faded away and I've been meaning to ask about him earlier, but just got caught up in the Dorian and Ant that I kept forgetting. Truly though, such a great story!
mimi007 chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
girl to tell you the truth u do not and i repeat DO NOT need to edit this story, it is perfect and i would love to see a sequel! this is by far one of the best stories i have read on this site! please don't edit it!
Allison chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
So I know this is cheesy, but I would LOVE to read an epilogue for this story... just that I know for sure that he comes back.

This was a really good story, I really enjoyed and I hope that you definitely continue writing other stories! Good job!
andee lee chapter 20 . 2/26/2009

As if I could love this story any more, dammit! That ending was absolutely perfect! That last line had me laughing so damn hard... oh my God, classic Ant/Dorian. Loved it.

I loved the tenderness between them, the way they interacted with each other. It was understated and absolutely lovely and perfect and fun to read and... their chemistry always kept me into the story... I'm so sad to see it go.

This was an absolutely amazing story. I enjoyed it from the first moment I started reading and was hooked all the way to the end. I'll be looking forward to checking out the other stuff you post. :-)

Thanks for an amazing read. I can't believe it's over, but it couldn't have ended any other way.

I'm cheesing so hard right now, lol...but damn. Perfect. :-)

Chibii-Cherry chapter 20 . 2/26/2009

That was adorable, I love Dorian and Ant and Perry and all the other characters in this story. D It left me with a nice fluffy feeling even though he had to leave in the end ( he's atleast coming back.

Hope to see more written from you!
fancyacupoftea chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
I loved reading every chapter of your story it was so beautiful. It made my day when I would see a email in my inbox alerting me of a new chapter : ) your brilliant. The ending was bittersweet I think we all want to see a happy ending I hope you write an epilogue.

Just4Smiles chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
Aww that was a sweet ending. I'm really sad to see the story end, but excited to see what you'll add with the revisions.
Annaface chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
I usually hate endings that are even the slightest open, but it really fits this story and the characters. The perfect ending. :]

I'm going to miss reading about Ant and Dorian. -sigh-
Jevanminx chapter 20 . 2/26/2009
Aw, a truly beautiful ending. You did a magnificent job well done.

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