|Reviews for The Rules of Engagement|
| sayitstrue chapter 18 . 2/20/2009
Hey! Thanks for another great chapter! I appreciate how this chapter was set just a day after the last; usually you have scenes that happen one after the other but they don't really happen one after the other in real life... get what I mean? Haha. Sorry about that. Anyway, please please please update soon. I can't begin to imagine where the story is headed after this. More fluff, perhaps? Hahaha. Also, I don't know how to e-mail you, seeing as I can't view your e-mail address if I'm not a member. So I'll try this: soccer (underscore) rules (underscore) 168 . Hope you got that. Haha. Thank you!
| lost-pfreak23 chapter 18 . 2/18/2009
cute! and i was just thinking to myself... is this really rated T? but its ok cuz these past 2 chapters were super cute and fantastic and wonderful and ratings dont really matter and i wouldnt want a single thing changed!
| LupusAries chapter 18 . 2/18/2009
Well a good story so far. I really like their Chemistry. Chris and Perry are also fun. Hmm yes you might be pushig the t-rating a bit but what the heck, its fitting and good so far. And i sincerely hope that you dont let him die while he is on his next tour. Well i want to see how they cope with him being on tour.
| flowersinfall chapter 18 . 2/17/2009
I just finished reading this all the way though and it is very well written and I can't wait to see how it turns out!
| Lady R chapter 18 . 2/17/2009
*Sighs* I really am falling in love with both Ant and Dorian. Not looking forward to it when he have to leave. :(
| Lady R chapter 17 . 2/17/2009
I think you did the sex part well. It was enough for me to get the picture. I love it!
| mywaywithwords chapter 18 . 2/17/2009
I love your story! Just found it today, and couldn't wait to get through it, though now I am left wanting more. Please update again soon, it feels like you are coming to the end of the story, can't wait for another chapter, xoxo
| Singingperson chapter 18 . 2/16/2009
I LOVED it!
Ant and Dorian have always had such chemistry. It's really lovely to read.
I don't review much as I don't usually have the time, but I read every single chapter as soon as possible after I get an email chapter alert.
I have always, well, had certain opinions about soldiers, soldiering, and war, but reading this story has really changed my opinions in a lot of ways, I thank you for opening my eyes, somewhat.
Could you send the omitted scene from the last chapter, Chapter 17?
Again absolutely lovely chapter,
A devoted reader
| Em Crosthwaite chapter 18 . 2/16/2009
I thought this chapter was as equally sweet as chapters 14 and 17, but i wonder if there will be a happy ending. I feel like the story can't end with Ant and Dorian deciding to be exclusive as he leaves for another tour of duty, there needs to be more about their relationship actually lasting. Just something to think about. In the beginning of the dinner scene it was difficult to determine who had that first line of dialogue with Ant, I'm assuming it was Dorian's mother, but you might want to clarify that. Perry wad hilarious, especially when she walked in on them at the end.
I realize this is inspired by P & P, but how loosely? We already saw the Wickham figure in Jorma, or is he more of a Mr. Collins? And if he is a Wickham figure, is he more sinister than he seems? Will there be a Lady Catherine to interfere?
You've also introduced me to MoZella, and I am now addicted to her music. I love that song "Can't Stop", it's perfect for these two characters, and I think "Going Home" fits really well too, especially with the prospect of Dorian leaving.
| psykoteddy chapter 18 . 2/16/2009
May I pretty please have the 'deleted' scene from the last chapter? (Forgot to ask until now, haha.) Love the story and the characters. The nice thing about your story, though, is that I really am never sure quite what will happen next-the base storyline (soldier, love, leaving soon, etc.) is fairly predictable but you give it a new twist, which is much appreciated. Not everyone can make a cliche new. Hats off to you, ma'am!
| deeks chapter 18 . 2/16/2009
loved it! and you are the most awesome updater ever!
cant wait to read more!
| josieposie chapter 18 . 2/16/2009
Love the new chapter. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next and you are going to end this wonderful story. If it is possible I would love to read the part you left out on chapter 17. Thank you... Once again, love the story...
| peaceout chapter 18 . 2/16/2009
This chapter made me smile.
Hahahahahaha! The lipstick thing with Perry was HI-LARIOUS!
I'm still wondering how this is going to end. I seriously can't think of anything, unless it's a tragic ending, which would suck.
Update soon please!
| Lost and No One Cares chapter 18 . 2/16/2009
Pride and Prejudice?
Or am I pulling it out of my butt?
Good last two chapters
I liked them.
| Ema Marsel chapter 18 . 2/16/2009