This was an amazong chapter...please, keep pushing if, maybe even to M? Haha. And the sex scene was nt that different to the original scene, but still good nonetheless. i M glad i got to read it.

Romance is best served up fluffy with an undercurrent of considerable devotion and no regrets. AH-MAYZING! Love that they are together, love the parents, love Perry. Can't wait to read more and thank you very much for writing! X

Yay, fluff! Exactly the way it's supposed to be -starry eyes-

I love Ant and Dorian

Wonderfully fabulous, and on my birthday too!

Oh can I hope and pray that Dorian gets extra leave or something? Or is that a ridiculous thought? :)

YAY! I can sleep at night knowing that Ant decided to give Dorian a shot. Woop woop! :-)

Perry! Ha! She's always walking in, isn't she? Catching people in compromising positions. THat's so funny. I love her.

Ant's hilarious. I loved the line about driving a stick. And when Perry was like, "Oh, you must have been up all night..." LOL! I cracked up, laughed out loud. Too funny! Those devious little children. Who...are not children, but you know. They're scandalous!

So now that things are perfect, I'm just waiting for something to go wrong. Dun dun dun.

-Andee :-)

I love how quickly you update ) And I love how intimate oyu make these scenes. You are one talented writerr lol. I loved this chapter! So much. I think it's going to break my heart when Dorian leaves though ( . Hopefully she gets a chance to become a journalist and go with him hahahaha. Alright well update soon!

sneaky little Perry..he..he..Can't wait to read what's going to happen..Peace and Love..

WOO, yeah baby! Haha. :-)

It was a long time coming. That sexual tension was building for so damn long...I'm surprised they made it this long! Haha. :-)

For real though, that was straight up SEXAY!

I liked how the chapter ended though, even though I HATE the idea that they had a fight right after they shared all of that LURVE! yes, lurve. :-) I was kinda like, ooh, wince, Ant! Why did you do that? I suppose it was necessary though. I'm so interested to see what's going to happen. Still can't figure out the ending. But dammit if I haven't tried!

- Andee :-)

I am so glad you updated so soon!

I really loved the chapter - what Dorian said would make me melt too!

I'm really looking forward to the consequences of their decisions... what's to come?

Update soon!

i JUST FINISHED WHAT U HAVE WRITTEN SO FAR AND I ENJOED IT.

I really admire your writing technique i mean it takes alot to write a story but the dialogues bewtween Ant and Dorian that was amazing. It's very intelligent and makes the story more realistic Please keep it up!UPDATE!

LOVE,

Readfreak

i loved it! im so happy they finally started to clear things up and got together! it was really believable and not over the top at all. i wonder whats going to happen next..cant wait to read more!

happy valentines day to you to ]

Wowie! There's a Happy Valentines scene... HA, Well liked it alot, but can I shake her? Well written and I really think the characters are very believable.

Wonderful... plus I downloaded MoZella, I really like that Can't Stop song. It was really good! Update... Now?

Ooh...things are heating up (and then burning out). I would like to read that extra scene to compare the two versions (with and without), I think it's completely fine without the explicit scene, because it's more about Dorian and Ant's emotional relationship. It might have been overwrought with the extra scene, especially because they go from a heated sweet moment back to an argument fairly quickly. I don't know if I'm making sense, but hopefully I am.

Finally!They confessed their ..I wanted to read everything dat you wrote so,if u don't mind,send me the deleted scene..Peace and Love...

Good scene.

I really enjoyed it and I liked the progression.

I'm glad Ant got everything out now. It's all up to Dorian now. Man, I don't know how this is going to end so I'm on the edge with curiosity.

Update soon please!