oh lol send it to

thankyou

ohh! send me the other version please?

nice chapter... i would like to read that scene by the way... update soon!

I wanna read the longer version! XD Thanks so much for updating. This chapter was awesome. More tension coming, I see. Please update son!

I so love the story! It's really cute. And they've finally acted on their feelings (sorta...) yay!

I don't think the smut you would've added would suck. wow. did that make any sense to you? i have to say, I'm not even exactly sure what i was saying. lol-but send me the part you left out anyways. I haven't come across any great stories lately, and i need to be reading something-anything. it's like OCD...OK not really. and that was a bad comparison, but anyways, ya.

update soon please!

So i am in absolute love with your story. its amazing. and this chapter was so good your an amaizing writer. oh i spotted one little tiny maybe typo depending on what you were going for. the part where ant said i am not your ex, you used your twice. dont know if that was like an intetnional or not but wanted to point it out. : D Please update soon. thanks

I think your pretty good at smutt. It will be interesting to see how they fix this. I thought that Dorian glowed when they argued. Maybe that only counts when they aren't arguing about each other. Update soon.

I absolutely love your story. At first, I thought it was going to be another cliche thing but wanted to give it a try because, admittedly, your summary is actually pretty catchy...Lame reason to read a story you really don't want to read, but I was curious. I hope you update soon because now I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love Dorian. I see myself as more similar to Ant (we share the same views...though I don't like to think of myself as narrow minded...I really hope I'm not anyway...)but I could totally relate to Dorian too. I was wondering, what IS Ant's ethnicity? And was she raised in New York? I am actually a mahnattan-er myself (though I'm not American) and I noticed that when she was thinking or talking, she used British English and the metric system. Also, her mom is Asian...so she's part Asian...but Dorian said she was mixed and she used the whole not-American way of referring to things...

Anyway, other than that, I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, I want to read that smutty scene you omitted from the chapter (all in honor of Valentines day of course)XD

-kemi

oh that was fabulous! Wonderful as usual.

I am so, so, SO glad they've finally got it all out!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

M

well i thought this was a pretty good chapter. i'm happy they did finally have sex and i think you should have included the sex scene but then again people might have complained. not sure.

anyway i'm glad everything is out in the open i kinda hope that she falls asleep in his bed and when he comes back from the drive he climbs in bed with her and holds her close.

i love this story! i read it all in one sitting lol...please update soon! im dying with anticipation!

I love the fact they finally got together, it is about time. Love the story and keep it coming. Can't wait for the next chapters. I would love to read the part you left out on chapter 17. GREAT JOB WITH THE STORY...

Holy cow! First off, I'm so unbelievably happy that you updated so soon because most authors that I review, wait for many long days to update again. Second off, this chapter was mindblowing. ABSOLUTELY MINDBLOWING. They're soo hott. And I'm really happy that you added a small smitten of a fight in there because we wouldn't want the two of them thinking that it's a relationship based on sex. So that totally brought another good side to this story. I loved it and that's pretty much all I have to say. You're an incredible author.. it was amazing. Oh and I don't want to sound like another teenager, but I'd love to read what you left out - not that it's because it's "sexual"I swear. I'm not that kind of person but it might just make this chapter 10 x better than it already is. Happy Valentines Day!

Wow... i really liked it too! I loved their finally getting together, but also I thought the conversation was so realistic and they definitely need to talk about those things. so great job!

charlotte

Hiya happy valentines day to you too. And yes i d actually really like to read the gratuitious scene if you dont mind. I thought this chapter was realistic enough, i just cant wait to read what happens next.