Reviews for The Rules of Engagement
Secretsecret chapter 15 . 2/8/2009
\ I seriously think that you're making the rape scandal a bigger deal than it should be. If Ant had even a brain she would figure out that Dorian's not that type of person at ALL and that it shouldn't be an issue. I just don't see any evidence of how Dorian could be like that. It's a thin plot line.
g chapter 15 . 2/8/2009
She seriously needs to listen to Chris. And I still think Jorma told her about the rape just to keep her away from Dorian.
FM Radio chapter 14 . 2/8/2009
Oh good lord. You end it there? Update, please? I really like your story and i love how it's developing! I couldn't stop reading and now it's 4 am. Oh well. Please update soon!
lost-pfreak23 chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
i thought the kissing scene was pretty well done, so dont beat yourself up thinking you sucked at it. the chapter was good and im holding my breath in suspense about perry!
REEVIIEWW chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
You may want to review for spelling.

Just some minor mistakes, like you put racorder instead of recorder :D

And I thought it was very climatic :D
Lady R chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
Oh my! I could totally picture the whole scene between Dorian and Ant. You wrote it extremely well! That whole dance scene and then the part after...oh boy, I need to drink some ice cold water. The temperature in here just got a little hotter! LOL
andee lee chapter 14 . 2/6/2009

That was a fabulous kissing scene. I don't have a clue what you're talking about when you say anti-climatic. I'd say it was pretty damn climatic! LOL!

I really did enjoy that, though... you have such an amazing way of describing things! Damn!

LOL I almost forgot about Perry in the hospital because I was thinking about that make-out session... that was fabulous...and wonderful...and about damn time! But now I'm worried about Perry and wondering what happened...and what would have happened if THAT hadn't have...happened...haha?

Oh, man. I love drama!

Can't wait for more.

-Andee :-)
M chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
It is simply delicious.

I am absolutely in love with the entire story and of course Dorian. :)

Please, please, please keep up the good work!

crazylady4 chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
hey i really like this story please update again soon!. Whats wrong with Perry. Seriously there is no way Dorian participated in the Rape is there. he couldn't have. and as cliché as this story is i absolutely adore it.
Elle chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
This is the best thing I've read on fp for a LONG time. Keep it up girl. I am loving it and very, very hopeful that Ant and Dorian will make it as a couple! X
sayitstrue chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
Thanks for the update! That Dorian/Ant encounter was very cute. Then sexy. And altogether great. More tension coming, I see, what with Perry in the hospital and everything. I can't wait. Please update son. Thank you!
Jevanminx chapter 14 . 2/6/2009
Oh, very sexy, hehehe. OMG, I hope Perry is not seriously injured, it was a good way to break up Ant and Dorian though, and I love that last sentence, very good.

Kyrina chapter 14 . 2/5/2009
this chapter is really good, i like the intimate scene, its written nicely.
Ema Marsel chapter 14 . 2/5/2009
HOLY put a four letter word that I don't think would be appropriate after that holy... it begins with a S. And no, I think you got that kissing scene dont perfectly. I was holding my breath the entire time, and I am really glad you didn't just let them kiss once and then they begin to hate each other. Because I am sorry, you can't just kiss a person once in that type of situation... Yeah, but WAY TO GO. I have been looking for a new story to read and has kept me reading, and yours has. I LOVE IT. Have you ever read Letter Tag, you should look into it, cause it is great.

Well way to go, I enjoyed it and will probably go read it again!
peaceout chapter 14 . 2/5/2009
That was an intense make out scene.

I hope Perry is gonna be okay! She's so funny and cool! Don't kill her!

Update soon please!
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