I loved this chapter! they finally put some use to the sexual tension. I hope Perry's okay, and I'm assuming things might become more awkward between Dorian and Ant?

I gotta say that you seem pretty darn good at writing kissing scenes to me! Finally! What on earth happened to Perry? If things with Jorma are just casual, is it really cheating? Lots more questions to answer. Can't wait.

WOW talk about big suprise! I really hope he wasn't involved in anything but i guess we will see the truth in time. The characters are really devolping nicely and the almost kiss scene was great. I am so anxious for the next chapter I CAN'T WAIT to see what exactly happened on that night. PLEASE update soon :)

~mip*

Oh please update soon!

Just read your story and I really love it and wow, this chapter brought in much more drama. And I have to say, some of arguments between Dorian and Ant are interesting. You sure have an opinion considering American political society.

i love your story. it makes me want to write a love story. you influenced me. thank you so much.

Ooh, juicy. Dorian's got all kinds of secrets, doesn't he?

I'm interested to see how this will change things with Ant and whether we'll see a big blow up about it or not. And how the article might change. Or not...

HMM!

This one's got me thinking. Looking forward to the next one,

Andee :-)

I stumbled upon this story and I am absolutely, one hundred thousand percent in love with it.

Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the rest of it to come through!

M

Whooa I didn't see that coming. And no Dorian/Ant. But still pretty good. Please update soon? Thanks!

o nice conflict, cant wait till the next chappy!

I just got into your story today and I love it!

You took a somewhat cliche storyline and made it really original!

I can't wait for more! Update soon :-)

looking forward to the big confrontation! and everything else...

ooh that is some juicy stuff

enugh i wonder what's going to happen now...

can't wait for what's next(:

i love those two(:

Because I know this is loosely based in P & P, something tells me that Jorma is the Wickham figure and that he was there at the party and maybe even involved in the incident.

This is Serena btw. I don't really write anymore so I don't usually leave reviews in my name. Anyways, this conflict is interesting but it's still sort of out of the blue. I think there should have been a better way of blending the plots? And that Jorma should have a least more flirtatious qualities since they are dating even if it's casual. And I'm also disgusted with the way Ant lost faith in Dorian so quickly. She's so "smart" yet she can't make her own conclusions especially when it comes to someone's character like Dorian? A tad predicatable even if the plot wasn't. I don't know, I guess this just seems to me like it's a bigger deal than it actually is. I'm not saying that rape isn't a big deal because of course it is but ..Actually I don't know what I'm saying anymore, this chapter just didn't have that much of an emotional effect on me but that is just my opinion.