So, here's the major conflict. Wow, this is huge. I look forward to seeing how Ant deals with this one. And, I can't wait for Dorian to see Ant all dressed up for the gala. I'm pretty sure he's going to flip seeing her all "girly". LOL

OMG! What an ending! Loved it!

I also thought Ant's brother to be so adorable. I loved how they reacted to Dorian. Loved the his whole interaction with them.

I think Jorma did that on purpose!

Damn you!

That was a fabulous "kissing" scene though, even though there was no...KISSING! DAMMIT! But really, I loved the descriptions. Could practically feel the electricity between them.

AND ARGH! FREAKIN PERRY! I will fight her! haha!

Man, oh man. That was awesome, haha. I got all excited and then it was like... oh. boo. :-)

The twins were absolutely hilarious! Running around without pants on... haha! I really liked the dinner scene when Dorian and the twins were mouthing across the table. I WILL CUT YOU. BRING IT. lol. that was awesome.

ARGH! I can't WAIT to find out what's gonna happen next. TELL ME they are going to take the next step soon! My little pitter-pattering heart can't take much more of this teasing, dammit! :-)

Great chapter!

-Andee

LOL I liked the line about Dorian being a recovering cock. That was awesome!

I really love Dorian, though. :-D he he. Maybe cuz I have a thing for men in uniform.

But they need to figure this out already, damn! Well maybe not. I like the tension.

-Andee :-)

Oh you ARE a tease! It will just serve to ramp up the tension between them. Glad to see some more insight into Ant. The next chapter should be pleasantly uncomfortable for all parties involved! Update soon.

Hey, I really like your story. I like how there are obvious obstacles in the way and it's not particularly predictable.

I find some instances unbelievable though. For instance, at the magazine, why would an editor give this newbie writer an article opportunity so quickly? I would think that the editor would have them both write stories then she would decide on the end which one to run.

I like the political sassyness of it. I wish the story wasn't completely dominated by Dorian and Ant. For instance, why isnt' more shown between Ant and the other guy? Give Dorian an actual run for his money? Why don't we see more of Perry's boyfriend?

Another thing, the various points of view during the story is refreshing but you might want to make it more clear who's perspective the reader is looking out of. I'm not asking for something as obvious/tacky as like, labels such as "Perry's POV" but I'm saying when you change point of views, don't start with pronouns because the antecedents established.

I love This story. cant wait for the update.

they are so perfect for each other. i'm very proud of you for being able to make them so different. i could never do that.

OMG!

i loved the way you described the "kiss" section it was actually quite amazing! (: your an amazing author tbh

anywyas... please please please update soon! (you do update really quick tho so i cant complain :D! haha) i really want to see them together!

lmao anyways good job amazing chapter! :D

Damn you, and damn Perry for her timing, they were so close.

JM

aww i was really looking foreward to that kiss... well, its a good story and i hope you update soon! D

I was swearing at Perry! Well I was swearing at my computer STUPID PERRY and some other explicatives that are not appropriate for other people to hear! Ugh, I love this story!

Shit shit shit. Yes, you are a tease. Please please PLEASE update tomorrow? You're killing me. (As much as I'd like awkward Ant/Dorian tension, I'd just really like more Ant/Dorian interaction. No Jorma, please? OH OH OH Or cliche jealousy on Dorian's part. That'd work. Haha.)

This is crazy suspenseful! Great chapter, i like how he met her parents. Almost kissing- nice touch! Update soon!