aww stupid guys just don't get it

haha

but then again he doesn't know the problem so he can't really be blamed

either way, i liked it (:

this story first attracted me cuz im a solid lefty and can completely identify w/ Ant. its cool to read about a soldier's military views (even if they are fictional). its a very interesting and well written story and you sound like you know what you're talking about. i like it and cant wait for more!

Great twist!

I hate misunderstandings! If only she had listened in a little bit longer she would have found out he was attracted to her and maybe interested in starting something. Boo. I wonder who will cave first or find out that she overheard. As for Kim, I don't know if I believe him when he says he's over her. Well either way Kim is in the past and he needs to move on.

Don't worry, no fruit. There's no way Dorian is going to let the subject go like that. He'll figure out whats wrong eventually, by either pushing her until she explodes at him, or being sneaky. He is in Recon. I wonder if Jorma has picked up on their attraction? He's not gay also is he? Ant could totally take advantage of Dorian right now. I mean, as far as exploiting him in the article of course. As for the feedback, I actually do have an account on this website, but I can never remember this sign in or password. Its a pain, so I just don't go to the trouble usually. An author on a different site that I read on answers reviews IN the reviews.(As in she clicks the 'leave a review' button and leaves her replies there.) It might be something to consider anyway. Next chapter should be interesting!

Oh NO! He doesn't understand! lol...poor Ant. Ok, I admit I have only read one chapter...this one. I liked it though so I will have to go back and take another looksee!

Ah. Thank you for updating so consistently :)

So Ant only heard half of what Dorian was saying... or all of it?

I like this turn of events. It is a bit cliche, but I love cliche at times. I like the idea that now Dorian has to make an effort. He's going to have to come out of his shell and I hope he does to resolve the misconception Ant now has regarding his feeling towards her.

Wow.. I'm 're a professional aren't u?Anyhow,write soon. Say 3-4 chapters in one day..he..he.. no and Love..

The devolpment in these last few chapters has been great. Here we are really getting to see their attraction to each other build. I enjoyed the part where they talked about kim. I think it filled in some blanks and let us into Dorian's thoughts on the matter. I can't wait for the next chapter and the huge fight that Dorian and Ant are bound to have.

Update Soon :)

~mip*

Dammit, Dorian! You and your loud mouth... grr! I want to punch him! Only I don't because it wasn't that bad, but still!

Why is it that when someone overhears another person saying something bad about them, they never stick around to hear the good part that comes after? Argh!

:-)

I love the tension, though, man. Love it. It makes everything so much more fun!

And you officially rock my world for updating like a beast. It's AMAZING and makes me love this story even more than I already do. :-)

WORD! Can't wait for Capitulo Once... and now i am speaking in spanish, ha ha.

-Andee

Looking forward to Washington. I hope it's the next chapter! (:

He is on the defensive! I love that Perry helped set him up. Dorian may be even more uncomfortable when Jorma shows up. The whole Kim situation is still a mystery. Will Ant find out about her and the rowing team incident when she investigates for the story? Washington could be very interesting.

I just finish reading all the chapters, and I really love what you wrote so far. Please update soon!

just a bit of a criticism:

1. in the U.S. we say don't say "mum," but "mom".

2. we don't call the top parts of a car a "bonnet," it's "hood" for us.